Topic: Her Pain
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Wed 11/28/12 11:24 PM
Her Pain

“Don’t, please just don’t”

“But . . .”

She asked him
not to explain
told him that it hurt enough as it was
“I don’t want another lie”

Between
the room’s darkness
and her tears
he felt her soul
and what he had done to her
“I’m so sorry”

“Not this time”

He stood
unsure of what to do
should he reach out to her
try to comfort her
or was it time to leave
but he feared leaving meant
goodbye
“Please . . . talk to me. Say something”

Another tear fell
as she shook her head
she wanted to tell him
that she couldn’t
that there were no more words
to describe her pain
how could he?
how could he love her more than their years
more than their struggles
more than the reasons they held on
more than her
there were no words

His head fell
as if every breath he ever had
somehow dissipated into thin air
leaving only what his lies
had created
her pain


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Thu 11/29/12 12:13 AM
Another wow Mig..

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Thu 11/29/12 12:56 AM
oh my... my heart aches for both of you.. this piece is overwhelming.. with so much love between you just seems like maybe time will work things out.. flowerforyou

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Thu 11/29/12 06:23 AM
drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Thu 11/29/12 06:29 AM
I have to brace myself to read your poems (((Mig))) because they never fail to touch upon a personal experience....You do what you do so well, thank you for sharing your heart with us....:heart:

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Mon 12/03/12 02:27 AM

I have to brace myself to read your poems (((Mig))) because they never fail to touch upon a personal experience....You do what you do so well, thank you for sharing your heart with us....:heart:


Thanks Leigh . . . I try to touch a person's emotions when I write. I think it makes my work personal for the reader