Topic: Midnight Blues
mig25's photo
Tue 12/04/12 11:58 PM
Midnight Blues



I aint wishin’
on no star
they too far
figure they wouldn’t hear
the reasons for my tear
no I’ll just save
my wishes
for another day
maybe someone close would be interested
in what I have to say

I aint wishin’ on no star
they just a bother
shinin’ like everything’s beautiful
no they won’t
like to hear
how my life is just pitiful
she done gone
left before the sun had a chance
now I’m hurtin’ in bed
alone and no romance

It’s cold
and too dark to see
guess today
that’s my life’s story
wishin’ aint get me nowhere
she didn’t even stop to care
I could use a word or two
to swear
but I’d have to wear
my hate for her leaving
no I’ll just lay here
and keep grieving
nothing else to do
yeah, I got me a case
of the midnight blues



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Wed 12/05/12 12:16 AM
Wow,, mig,, I am > "maybe someone close would be interested in what I have to say" :heart: "I could use a word or two to swear but I’d have to wear my hate for her leaving" < gripping.. your sadness and anger is riveting.. brokenheart flowerforyou peace to you...

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Thu 12/06/12 01:24 AM
I could hear the harmonica playing..Awesome..

DaySinner's photo
Thu 12/06/12 10:15 AM
i agree this is good and it would play nicely in a song.

bastet126's photo
Thu 12/06/12 03:24 PM
i ain't wishin on no star
no more
either, mig :)

always enjoy your writes, but you know that flowerforyou

pennyg281's photo
Thu 12/06/12 11:34 PM

Amazing as always Migflowerforyou