Topic: ~ the taken road
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Wed 12/05/12 07:01 AM
i sit on the low part
of the sofa
to match the low part
of the day

my tears fall
my tears fail

i remember
as a kid
time would drag
like an endless
home reno
now time speeds
over the visible road
under the car mat

can a person be
envious of
their own life?

people,known,unknown
i would trade for nothing

myself,known,unknown
i would trade for nothing

life,known,unknown
i would trade for nothing

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Wed 12/05/12 07:03 AM
drinker flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou
very nice:)

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Wed 12/05/12 07:13 AM
flowerforyou "can a person be envious of their own life?" That's a very unique perspective.. never thought about it like this before?

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Wed 12/05/12 11:56 PM
flowerforyou Awesome Write I always enjoy your stuff T.B.

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Thu 12/06/12 01:14 AM
Loving your style TB..

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Thu 12/06/12 05:00 AM
2KidsMom...flowerforyou
Athenarose2...flowerforyou
pennyg281...flowerforyou
Ainjel..flowerforyou
what a great start to the day reading all your comments..thankyou.

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Thu 12/06/12 05:21 AM
Edited by tazzops on Thu 12/06/12 05:22 AM
flowerforyou flowers :thumbsup: flowers :thumbsup: flowers :thumbsup: flowers

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Thu 12/06/12 07:10 AM
I must agree with Tazz on this one Teasingflowerforyou :thumbsup: flowerforyou

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Tue 01/29/13 02:11 PM
You won't trade... but do you barter?

Loved the imagines of the endless home reno and watching the road through holes in the floorboards.
flowerforyou

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Tue 01/29/13 03:10 PM
possibly

me too....


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Tue 01/29/13 05:17 PM
I love an open road... possibilities, vague words with meanings upon meanings.

It does pass by quickly though... sometimes.
Slo times on the low-end of the sofa can be nice too... js.

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Tue 01/29/13 05:36 PM
im sure you will call me out on anything too vague to your liking....

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Tue 01/29/13 05:42 PM
Nope.
Sometimes mebbe... but I'll let you be you for the most part.

Ask when I can... (and I appreciate the grace that you give in responding).
Stay silent more than I talk.
And think.

Come to think of it... I've been talking a lot.

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Tue 01/29/13 07:06 PM
and you'll be you
it's fine
the smile poem
would have never been...