Topic: The way you make me feel
JeanAguiler's photo
Thu 12/06/12 11:24 AM
When you are around
Everyone smiles and are poised
and the birds sing in rejoice
The world is uplifted from hatred
and from all painfull noise

Without you
Chaos breaks lose
Everybody breaks the rules
The birds fall into depression
and did i mention?
What happened to the population
And their general loving sensation

Love is in the air
There is no longer such a sensation of despair
People are friendly,
rather than venting harmfull affairs
Chaos breaks lose when you are gone
Where did it ever go, your sweet song?


MisLopez's photo
Thu 12/06/12 12:01 PM
I like you poem. Nice work :thumbsup:

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Thu 12/06/12 01:44 PM
This homage is very touching, Jean.. must be somebody really special to have this kind of sway...flowerforyou

bastet126's photo
Thu 12/06/12 03:20 PM
hope to read more from you jeanaguiler, welcome :)