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he gives her
18 roses every week beautiful she watches them she watches them die every color every week and the winter remains unforgiving and she crawls back inside herself as they die the roses wonder if she knows they watch her every week beautiful and wonder if she will miss them |
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Nothing harder than watching the roses wilt one petal at a time....
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Every week the roses glow and
seeing them wilt tears down her cheeks flow Her heart feels heavy and she cries as such is the life of roses such short is their life but as they wilt to someones life happiness they blow your poem is really nice and if you wish please add these few lines to your poem after editing and adding a few lines if you want..........keep writing more and more :) and happy new year |
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Brilliant write....
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tazzops...thankyou for your constant
Leigh2154.... harsh2019....thankyou,best to you in this new year Up2Us...i appreciate you seeing something in this... |
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Up2Us...i appreciate you seeing something in this... You always have a very unique perspective....
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Brilliant write is right..
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Ainjel...
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Nice !
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KIK2me...thankyou.
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7gV3g9LCvPc
Not sure why... but that's where me mind goes. Beautiful write... even if my thoughts go in a different direction.
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Teditis....you were going the 'right' direction...
Zimzane2...
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