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Edited by
DaySinner
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love I cannot do without
without is without meaning if isolation is life's bid suffering should be my end live as I must survive and trust as nothing ever lasts so pain does also pass if it's not possible this one chance i have missed my heart crushed beneath life's spinning rear wheel reveal to me all your indifference in the celbrations that you inspire remind me again, and again, how pain holds hands with desire time makes strangers of us and the feelings we once knew as we move along separete paths only love may follow and remain true |
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I'm loving it...
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Richard...
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"Time makes us strangers...as we move along separate paths...only love 'may' follow"...These lines are my favorite part of this farewell as they speak to me in the "positive" about something negative....Good for you Richard..
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love I cannot do without without is without meaning if isolation is life's bid suffering should be my end live as I must survive and trust as nothing ever lasts so pain does also pass if it's not possible this one chance i have missed my heart crushed beneath life's spinning rear wheel reveal to me all your indifference in the celbrations that you inspire remind me again, and again, how pain holds hands with desire time makes strangers of us and the feelings we once knew as we move along separete paths only love may follow and remain true A second read brought new meaning...I love this poem exactly as written...You have a natural talent my friend...Stick with it!
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Nice Write.
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there is always one out there that wait for you even if the world is cruel and the one is Friends for life listening ears a smile that understands and lighter loads Doctors soul wounds thoughts shared a helping hand griefs choking of friendship ties smile turns to tears and tears to smile truth hurts but removes all doubt eternal confidential of right and wrong a friendship with honesty endures all things. |
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Nice . . . really nice
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Edited by
DaySinner
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Wed 03/06/13 10:50 AM
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Thank you Leigh, Penny, Ragnhild, and Mig.
Ragnhild, I like what you wrote. I believe there is love in the world if we are willing to see and receive it.
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I enjoyed reading your write
And i hope you find happiness  KiK |
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yes it is .. but only if we open our eyes
and opens the heart of doors and I must say that the little tedybjørn said to his friend when his friend asked about love and heart teddy friend says so here WE have two arms and two hands to hold things ..... WE have two legs to go with ..... WE have two eyes to see allt the beauty surrounding us .... We have two ears and hear all, if we only give us time But bear why we have only one heart? then the teddy bear Answered: The second heart we have given away to another friend .... but we have to find him self! and be sure that he gives us sit second heart for then my friend, We have two hearts and true friend in life ... |
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