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Topic: Unmasking The Third Eye.
2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 05/08/13 07:59 AM
I can see her face, it carries the same look it does most days. I can see the beauty, she used to be.I can see now nothing, but abuse and sorrow. I can see where she used to live life carefree. I can see she is losing faith in mankind, compassion life should hold,and in the judicial system, what a joke. I can see her ask her God why the tables have been turned so high. She used to fear dieing,now that is replaced with something more evil.I can see her offspring makes her feel so little. I can see her now,she is nothing more than a meek mouse, wearing a monster face. I can see she is abused and hurt.I can see her driving to work. I am looking at her reflection,I am waiting and watching, hoping it will come, most days it doesn't. She logs in,she knows where to look.I can see her heading for the clown mask, she left on the hook.I can see she loves it, for it's pasted on grin. I can see her so lovingly pick it up and put it on, again. It is her perfect mixture from within.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Wed 05/08/13 08:01 AM
You are indeed, not clowning around with words. I really like this.

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 05/08/13 08:06 AM Edited by 2KidsMom on Wed 05/08/13 08:07 AM
You are indeed, not clowning around with words. I really like this. Thank you,(((Tazz))) No clowning this time,they speak the truth. but I am so blessed to see the hope and sunshine,even through black and blue.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Wed 05/08/13 08:13 AM
I have felt this way many days of my life. Now I feel a calmness of everything. I feel your words in many ways. I feel the strength of the text.

jacktrades Joined Tue 09/11/12 Posts: 4395	Wed 05/08/13 08:45 AM
We all go into the darkness at times.Your very deep. God bless you

KiK2me Joined Sun 01/06/13 Posts: 8732	Wed 05/08/13 09:42 AM


stevenct56 Joined Thu 06/30/11 Posts: 55	Wed 05/08/13 01:12 PM
I can see her face, it carries the same look it does most days. I can see the beauty, she used to be.I can see now nothing, but abuse and sorrow. I can see where she used to live life carefree. I can see she is losing faith in mankind, compassion life should hold,and in the judicial system, what a joke. I can see her ask her God why the tables have been turned so high. She used to fear dieing,now that is replaced with something more evil.I can see her offspring makes her feel so little. I can see her now,she is nothing more than a meek mouse, wearing a monster face. I can see she is abused and hurt.I can see her driving to work. I am looking at her reflection,I am waiting and watching, hoping it will come, most days it doesn't. She logs in,she knows where to look.I can see her heading for the clown mask, she left on the hook.I can see she loves it, for it's pasted on grin. I can see her so lovingly pick it up and put it on, again. It is her perfect mixture from within. Hmmm...pretty intense.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 05/08/13 02:09 PM
'like'

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 05/08/13 02:14 PM
(Jack) you are so right..It is very dark. (kik)Thank you for the mask and rose. (steven)always understanding. (teasing)such a pleasure,thank you for the flower

Jennerling Joined Wed 10/14/09 Posts: 5492	Wed 05/08/13 02:38 PM


HeadnHeart Joined Wed 06/02/10 Posts: 1270	Wed 05/08/13 02:49 PM
climbing, falling, reflecting yet hidden. a beauty

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Wed 05/08/13 03:23 PM


2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Thu 05/09/13 06:51 AM Edited by 2KidsMom on Thu 05/09/13 06:51 AM
((Jennerling)) Thank you for taking time to stop in.:) ((HeadnHeart))Well said,Thank you. ((insangel))Thank you, for the flower.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Thu 05/09/13 07:22 AM
It's been awhile nice to see you writing. Great write intense

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Thu 05/09/13 07:57 AM
It's been awhile nice to see you writing. Great write intense ((pkh))Thank you very much.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Thu 05/09/13 07:17 PM
good to see ya!

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Fri 05/10/13 06:30 AM
good to see ya! ((((kc)))))Good to see you too!!

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Fri 05/10/13 07:56 PM
Inspiring!

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Mon 05/13/13 11:55 AM
Inspiring!

Someone2callmyown Joined Thu 05/09/13 Posts: 870	Mon 05/13/13 12:28 PM
I can see her face, it carries the same look it does most days. I can see the beauty, she used to be.I can see now nothing, but abuse and sorrow. I can see where she used to live life carefree. I can see she is losing faith in mankind, compassion life should hold,and in the judicial system, what a joke. I can see her ask her God why the tables have been turned so high. She used to fear dieing,now that is replaced with something more evil.I can see her offspring makes her feel so little. I can see her now,she is nothing more than a meek mouse, wearing a monster face. I can see she is abused and hurt.I can see her driving to work. I am looking at her reflection,I am waiting and watching, hoping it will come, most days it doesn't. She logs in,she knows where to look.I can see her heading for the clown mask, she left on the hook.I can see she loves it, for it's pasted on grin. I can see her so lovingly pick it up and put it on, again. It is her perfect mixture from within.