Topic: What Is Done
goldenhinde's photo
Thu 08/15/13 03:36 PM
My jaws clench, my eyes sting
A pain crosses my face and drops
To my feet, as if my heart has fallen
And it rocks side to side before resting still

I stand still because moving will change nothing
I cannot change the direction of the wind
I stand still, I do not lean into the wind,
I am not pushed by its force
My actions will change nothing at all

I give into the fear and the sadness
Just long enough to feel it's edge
The edge that, like a razor, shaves off
What is not necessary off of me
Cuts who is not good for me, off of me

My surrender is my only choice
This choice that fills empty hopes
A river of surrender carves out
My soul inside, grows a great canyon inside me
A new universe with it's own moon and sun
I will do nothing while what is done
Gets done

wc777's photo
Thu 08/15/13 03:56 PM
love it ... that is soooo awesome, did you write that?

oldhippie1952's photo
Thu 08/15/13 03:57 PM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: You're needing to collect your works in one thread Like I and AR did, and Leigh but she has guest writers on her steamy thread.

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Thu 08/15/13 04:01 PM
Golden!!...I love it when you suck me in like thislove ,,,,,You are so good at what you do!!flowerforyou

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Thu 08/15/13 04:04 PM

My jaws clench, my eyes sting
A pain crosses my face and drops
To my feet, as if my heart has fallen
And it rocks side to side before resting still

I stand still because moving will change nothing
I cannot change the direction of the wind
I stand still, I do not lean into the wind,
I am not pushed by its force
My actions will change nothing at all

I give into the fear and the sadness
Just long enough to feel it's edge
The edge that, like a razor, shaves off
What is not necessary off of me
Cuts who is not good for me, off of me

My surrender is my only choice
This choice that fills empty hopes
A river of surrender carves out
My soul inside, grows a great canyon inside me
A new universe with it's own moon and sun
I will do nothing while what is done
Gets done




I loved it...

goldenhinde's photo
Thu 08/15/13 04:13 PM
I really do appreciate your comments.

I did a youtube link if you want to hear it.

http://youtu.be/Az1BufR7Ivk

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Thu 08/15/13 04:32 PM

I really do appreciate your comments.

I did a youtube link if you want to hear it.



Fixed it for youhappy

http://youtu.be/Az1BufR7Ivk

Brava, brava, brava bella !!

goldenhinde's photo
Thu 08/15/13 04:36 PM
Thanks Leigh! Howd you do that?

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Thu 08/15/13 04:42 PM

Thanks Leigh! Howd you do that?


Enclosed the url on each end of the address like this ...If you quote my post, you can see how it is done...drinker

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Thu 08/15/13 04:45 PM
Actually Golden let me give you this help link, it shows you how to do lots of neat things like color print, size, and italics....Just click on it to open...

http://mingle2.com/topic/show/199646

goldenhinde's photo
Thu 08/15/13 04:46 PM
Edited by goldenhinde on Thu 08/15/13 04:51 PM
http://youtu.be/4oQlmP6Md0s

this is close to me

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Thu 08/15/13 05:16 PM

My jaws clench, my eyes sting
A pain crosses my face and drops
To my feet, as if my heart has fallen
And it rocks side to side before resting still

I stand still because moving will change nothing
I cannot change the direction of the wind
I stand still, I do not lean into the wind,
I am not pushed by its force
My actions will change nothing at all

I give into the fear and the sadness
Just long enough to feel it's edge
The edge that, like a razor, shaves off
What is not necessary off of me
Cuts who is not good for me, off of me

My surrender is my only choice
This choice that fills empty hopes
A river of surrender carves out
My soul inside, grows a great canyon inside me
A new universe with it's own moon and sun
I will do nothing while what is done
Gets done


So black yet white