Topic: ~ hottest day
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Sat 07/12/14 09:57 AM
it's hot
maybe the hottest day ever
telephone lines and poles
leave no asphalt shadows
he stepped in front of me
in the shimmering
his was the only smile for miles
and he made me smile too
no clich� ice cream in hand
no melting ice cubes
yet in that moment
air and heat merged
and I stayed
suspended
my mind and body
in an altered state of stillness
it's hot
maybe the hottest day ever

Astrid's photo
Sat 07/12/14 10:00 AM
I like it..flowerforyou :thumbsup:

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Sat 07/12/14 10:08 AM
biggrin flowers flowers flowers :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Sat 07/12/14 10:11 AM

it's hot
maybe the hottest day ever
telephone lines and poles
leave no asphalt shadows
he stepped in front of me
in the shimmering
his was the only smile for miles
and he made me smile too
no clich� ice cream in hand
no melting ice cubes
yet in that moment
air and heat merged
and I stayed
suspended
my mind and body
in an altered state of stillness
it's hot
maybe the hottest day ever


Uh huh...:thumbsup:

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Sat 07/12/14 04:39 PM
Astrid23....thankyou.flowerforyou

tazzops....flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

2KidsMom.....hmmmhmmm..flowerforyou

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Sun 07/13/14 10:39 AM
Well another brilliant piece of work....lil steamy over here lol....

mig25's photo
Sun 07/13/14 11:04 AM

it's hot
maybe the hottest day ever
telephone lines and poles
leave no asphalt shadows
he stepped in front of me
in the shimmering
his was the only smile for miles
and he made me smile too
no clich� ice cream in hand
no melting ice cubes
yet in that moment
air and heat merged
and I stayed
suspended
my mind and body
in an altered state of stillness
it's hot
maybe the hottest day ever


Love this!!!!!!!

mig25's photo
Sun 07/13/14 11:04 AM

it's hot
maybe the hottest day ever
telephone lines and poles
leave no asphalt shadows
he stepped in front of me
in the shimmering
his was the only smile for miles
and he made me smile too
no clich� ice cream in hand
no melting ice cubes
yet in that moment
air and heat merged
and I stayed
suspended
my mind and body
in an altered state of stillness
it's hot
maybe the hottest day ever


Love this!!!!!!!

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Sun 07/13/14 11:10 AM
Oh my.....smokin

chax812's photo
Sun 07/13/14 12:33 PM
this truly got me a smile... haha cheers n keepwriting

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Sun 07/13/14 02:55 PM
thebucfan....thankyou...smile..flowerforyou

mig25...happy you do!!..flowerforyou

Up2Us....oh my...what?..flowerforyou

chax812...thankyou flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Mon 07/14/14 07:43 PM
whenever i hear jackson browne on the radio, (which isn't often enough) it always reminds me of the southern california summer nights of my youth.

when i read you, i can't help but think about van morrison performing. no fireworks, no frills, just good solid, smooth, in control, meaningful syntax.

:heart: flowerforyou


"....let your soul and spirit fly into the mystic"

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Tue 07/15/14 06:33 AM
k....and I am pleased when you read me...:heart: ...and I'm listening to van morrison..into the mystic..and it is smooth.....flowerforyou

tommyboy1101's photo
Tue 07/15/14 07:00 AM
teasing = :heart:

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Tue 07/15/14 01:41 PM
tommy = sweet man flowerforyou