Topic: Looking back at me
angel68111's photo
Sat 10/04/14 08:28 AM
Looking in the mirror what do I see
A 46 year old woman starring back at me.
What is she saying eyes wide and blue
She is saying come on girl motivation is needed by you.

All the happy moments that she once enjoyed so much
Left without a goodbye just abandon in a rush.
But a glimpse of hope and a ray of light
Has opened that door to a new in sight.

So now as I look I can smile I can laugh
The creative passion deep from that hidden doorway has jumped out at last.
So no more hiding and write as u once did
As this 46 year old woman smiles happily like a giggly kid
Excitement and passion is flowing through her veins
No more mountains to climb no more stumbling blocks
The leash of life has returned and is not being left to rot

So now looking in mirror what is it she will see a light so bright from those big blue eyes
She standing tall contented in her way
Welcome back lady now let's get creativeness flowing each and every day.


lovingbj's photo
Sat 10/04/14 08:34 AM
Hello

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Sat 10/04/14 09:05 AM
That's a spirit! Keep going angel!waving

angel68111's photo
Sat 10/04/14 03:49 PM
Hello to lovingbj and thank u for dropping by. Yes thank u to NoMindGamesPlease appreciated :smile::thumbsup:

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Sat 10/04/14 07:53 PM
flowers

angel68111's photo
Sat 10/04/14 09:20 PM
Thank u tazzops

generaleugene's photo
Sun 10/05/14 01:27 AM
Enjoyed your rhymes :)

angel68111's photo
Sun 10/05/14 04:47 AM
Thank u :smile:all heartfelt

angel68111's photo
Sun 10/05/14 05:13 AM
Thank you

tommyboy1101's photo
Sun 10/05/14 05:13 AM
Edited by tommyboy1101 on Sun 10/05/14 05:14 AM
Now, angel68111. that's a pretty poem. Well written. Full of energy.

Nice piece, pal. Now, if ye can only drop all those negatives ye might be appreciate more in here.

tommy boy moran / Ireland.

premierblue's photo
Sun 10/05/14 08:22 AM
That's a beautiful poem, Angel. If only you channelled your energies into writing, whether it be poetry or prose, instead of harping on the past however painful it may be. Let the past be the past, and hopefully you'll step into a more rewarding tomorrow. :smile:

angel68111's photo
Sun 10/05/14 11:25 AM
Thank you for saying such lovely things yes u are right it isn't worth me being hurt for thank u I have wrote for many years then I stopped as my mum got so ill but I have started again and it's my passion :smile: