The better I get to know myself
The less I think of me.
Sometimes I cant help myself
for I have forgotten about Eternity.


I look into the mirror of life
To see what I can see,
And most of what I see is strife
and stark iniquity.

I try to change the image there
To something it should be;
But if I dont learn to care
I shall die inside cause I cannot see.

An image is staring back at me:
A face I do not like;
And I, myself---What I should be--
Will break the image of me with one strike.

Cause that selfish, thoughtless I
Which stands and stares at me.
Im am imploding, about to die
Because I never could, just be me.

that was a good read

Nice write

Thanks it was inspired by someone I knew.

Niice work there UP.


Great piece of work there if ya know what I mean

Thanks, I had help in thinking how I would feel if I were them.

Wow Tom that is good!!!

Thanks it was just a flowing thought

COOL write,,,,,dawg,,,,,,,,

WOW,,,I am starting to sound way to HIP,,,,,

You now have a chance to see

If you listened to me