I understood a little bit of it

Good job, prallels my own dark experience living on the streets

Awesome,relatable!

Beautiful, if you're not already published your definitely good enough to get published. I've only been published once in a magazine and then a couple of small things in the newspaper I had hoped to publish my Memoir but I got sidetracked and did not complete it. I have had a blog for 9 years

I can really relate to your writing even though I am a white woman. The conditions under which I have been living for the last 22 years are in many ways worse than what people endure in the hole also known as solitary confinement. I lived on the streets for almost two decades I have had my blog for 9 years and I was writing a book about my life but then the very thing that I was writing about I couldn't continue because of the conditions I was facing in violent urban as well as suburban America send me a message if you would like to link to my blog. If you do read my blog read the oldest post and then up to the newest post I hope that you are coping okay now that you are out?

She's right you asked for feedback but you're closed minded and you don't want to hear it

Ur more heavy then what I go4

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