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Fri 01/08/21 04:31 PM
If someone asks,
How I am doing,
I will smile and lie,
That I am fine,
Can't tell anyone,
You are the only thing,
Nowadays on my mind..

If someone asks,
What is so special about you,
What I see in you,
I will say,
You are like a mirror,
Each time I look,
I see myself in you,

If someone asks,
Why do I like you so much,
You are rude, boring,
And no fun,
I will say,
Maybe that's true,
But my heart feels,
You are still the one..



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Sat 01/02/21 01:49 AM

I love is this

Thank you smile2

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Fri 01/01/21 10:42 PM


Walk with me on the beach,
Dance with me in the rain,
Say that you want me,
Come let's fall in love again..

Look deep into my eyes,
See your picture in my heart's frame,
Say that you need me,
Come let's fall in love again..

Whether its days, weeks or months,
My feelings will remain the same,
you have nothing to lose, nothing to fear,
So come lets fall in love again,

Maybe its time now,
To forget the past,
To let go of pain,
Maybe its meant to be,
So come lets fall in love again :heart:

ps this is the very first poem I wrote and posted on this forum :-)


And it is beautiful


Thank you smile2

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Thu 12/31/20 12:07 PM

Happy New Year!!!!!!


Happy Near Year to you too smile2

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Thu 12/31/20 12:06 PM

:thumbsup:️. very nice


Thanks :heart:

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Wed 12/30/20 03:04 AM



very nice poem. You might want to edit that line that that says: To get go of pain. I think you wanted to say: To Let go of pain.


Thank you smile2 and yes that's correct. Its a typo but unfortunately the time to edit is over.


Fixed it for you bigsmile


Thank you so much smile2 :heart:

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Wed 12/30/20 02:47 AM

very nice poem. You might want to edit that line that that says: To get go of pain. I think you wanted to say: To Let go of pain.


Thank you smile2 and yes that's correct. Its a typo but unfortunately the time to edit is over.

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Wed 12/30/20 02:34 AM

You have a lovely way with words. I enjoyed reading this very much :heart:


Thank you and glad you liked it smile2

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Wed 12/30/20 02:12 AM

ONCE AGIAN , You proved that you are born with a Silver Spoon !!!!!!!


No, I wasn't lol but thank you smile2

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Wed 12/30/20 01:13 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .


Thank you smile2

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Tue 12/29/20 10:31 PM

nice


Thank you smile2

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Tue 12/29/20 08:06 PM
Walk with me on the beach,
Dance with me in the rain,
Say that you want me,
Come let's fall in love again..

Look deep into my eyes,
See your picture in my heart's frame,
Say that you need me,
Come let's fall in love again..

Whether its days, weeks or months,
My feelings will remain the same,
you have nothing to lose, nothing to fear,
So come lets fall in love again,

Maybe its time now,
To forget the past,
To let go of pain,
Maybe its meant to be,
So come lets fall in love again :heart:

ps this is the very first poem I wrote and posted on this forum :-)

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Thu 12/24/20 07:18 PM


Should I make a wish,
Upon on a falling star,
Or ask the Universe for a gift,
As Christmas is near?

Should I take a risk,
And ask for you,
As my wish, As my gift,
Coz I hold you so dear?

Should I light a candle,
Let it burn bright,
And be positive,
Our misunderstandings,
Will all clear,

Should I honestly tell you,
How I feel about you,
Or let you go,
This is my only fear,

Its months now since our break up,
Yet you are still on my mind,
You the only reason I am waiting,
The only reason I am here..


ps this is a reposting of my old poem. Thot to repost it as its Christmas soon :-)




i see it as sad....its always sad to miss now, and be stuck in the past..


Its sad but hopeful and sometimes wishes do come true smile2

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Thu 12/24/20 12:26 PM

Nice thoughts


Thank you smile2 :heart:

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Thu 12/24/20 12:56 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Thanks smile2

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Wed 12/23/20 04:03 PM
Should I make a wish,
Upon on a falling star,
Or ask the Universe for a gift,
As Christmas is near?

Should I take a risk,
And ask for you,
As my wish, As my gift,
Coz I hold you so dear?

Should I light a candle,
Let it burn bright,
And be positive,
Our misunderstandings,
Will all clear,

Should I honestly tell you,
How I feel about you,
Or let you go,
This is my only fear,

Its months now since our break up,
Yet you are still on my mind,
You the only reason I am waiting,
The only reason I am here..


ps this is a reposting of my old poem. Thot to repost it as its Christmas soon :-)

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Tue 12/22/20 09:45 PM

nice writes smile2 lots of feelings came out ...


Thank you smile2

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Tue 12/22/20 09:45 PM

:wink:

smile2

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Thu 12/17/20 12:02 AM


She might have Oceans of Emotions that Hit waves inside her every time she writes. .She will stand all of that. She might cry all night but she will wake up with a Smile the very next day to give out the Best in Her..!!!


smile2 :thumbsup:

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Thu 12/17/20 12:01 AM

She might have Oceans of Emotions that Hit waves inside her every time she writes. .She will stand all of that. She might cry all night but she will wake up with a Smile the very next day to give out the Best in Her..!!!


Nice smile2 :thumbsup:

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