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Thu 06/09/11 05:35 PM
i love poems and novellas and this seems to read like a novella. i have tried my hand at writing a few times and im no expert or crtique but your punctuation could be a little better?

keep it up you have the spark of literary prose:)

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Thu 06/09/11 05:09 PM
the works of william faulkner.

very...dark.

but before that it was "Zombie CSU"

good stuff to know if you want to become a zombie forensic investigator..lol

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Tue 06/07/11 05:28 PM
i didnt think stuff like that happened anymore..lol and it only happened on leave it to beaver or happy days.

wow..i just aged myself..lol

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Tue 06/07/11 05:24 PM
of course he's happy!! look at that huge smile behind that huge moustache..lol

im new i guess i better tread lightly..here's my ?

why does it say "evaporated milk" on the can and when you open it..theres milk in it...it should be empty..right?

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Tue 06/07/11 05:19 PM
nice.. very good...you made me laugh..

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Tue 06/07/11 05:04 PM
i guess i should temper myself...sorry..lol thanks for the welcome.

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Tue 06/07/11 04:27 PM
eat with no guilt..guilt adds pounds.lol

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Tue 06/07/11 04:18 PM
just saying hi..i hope to meet some nice ladies..sooner than later..lol much love;)