Thought provoking and self reflecting

It says you are who you are, each line being a neutral by the end,

I enjoyed that

The sun broke through
as a breeze awoke
Taking your spirit
as if it were smoke
I closed my eyes
with one last tear
My hand closed yours
now you’re not here

A part of me left
painfully torn
Emotionless, empty,
now thoroughly worn
Ritual’s follow,
flowers to arrange
I look to my phone
knowing you’re out of range

I come to see you brother,
to hold your hand
cold and pale
like tide left sand
A rose lay upon you
now in full bloom
cast shadows upon you
as if lit by full moon

Time passes
you learn to heal
still questions of
why you God did steal
Tears are shed
questions asked
In my heart I know
that you have passed

I do know now
you’re not all but gone
you taught me well
your legend lives on
All you had said
all you had taught
I realize you grew in me
your deep in my thought

Times get tough
they get me down
I think of you
to shed my frown
My brother this is not
our final goodbye
My friend forever
the dead don't die

This was worth dropping by for,

well done for penning for others thoughts. Your writes I'm sure do them the honour

If my put my dib in,

It is so nice to read your work, what you do with words is always beautiful.

Short, sweet and very neat

Personal

I sit in the summer eve'
Thinking of thee,
Where thou are
The grass is better
And green

However,when the thoughts
Of you come plainly
to me
Makes my leaf lonely
Forest truly
forever green.

We never met
We will never touch
I wanted to hold
You, this I wanted
So much, I shed not one
not two but thrice a tear
and too my chest
Of these I will treasure
And clutch.

Like jack and his
Beanstalk, I planted
These pearls, my
Three loving memories, to
see What would unfurl.
Would they grow to amaze
What would they become
Fearing these likely words
Fee
fi
fo
fum.

But as I climbed through
My clouds and the Sun
Then became clear, stood
Next to me a shadow
Then I knew you were near.

It'd be ever so rude to not drop in to enjoy your style,

Passing by
Quietly ebbing
Patiently as
A spider in webbing

Turned to round
Jagged to smooth
Glacial momentum
Flat to a grove

Mountainous movement
Stop not to falt
Valley born
Frictional jolt

Decomposition
Now turn to tar
Big bang, expansion
A life giving star

Baby blue to a
Face defined
Silently shaping are
The sands of time

Thank you for sharing this with me,
Inspires me to write

Thanks Bastet,

Welcome to where words fall as free as your flakes but together they then be known. I look forward to more,

My thoughts, from experience here all have heart, good place to share

Thank you as always Up2Us

Rainbows danced around my head
As my heavens opened and water shed,

An unfinished Ark, clueless, blind and dark
This imaginary arrangement
Deluded fantasy.

First to feel a sky's life blood
Last to recognise the flood.

Rainbows danced around my head
As the heavens opened, my watershed

I can never resist popping in to read you, words always played as if a harp. Thank you

It reminds me of a day many years ago when I sat at the side of the
Side of a road, cars passing by, I held my head in my hands and asked why.
I did not get an answer because sometimes there is no question, it just is. Those are the
Sentences you'll never finish.

I shed you ,my cast away soul,


You lay tracks, my imprisoned all.

Only one line of misdirection

Moving backwards would seem perfection.

So my lids will close, to retain this flood

I just feel misunderstood