thank you for your kind comment

deviating

Thank you.

What did you achieve from that?

I take it back, I never knew
A phone call to you you'd spill and spew
The damage caused, from small words said,
Could kick a man down and destroy his head.
Close and trusted, my dearest friend
This could be close to the dier end.
As it's said way down south,
Its the gentle touch of your big mouth,

Dumb it down, make it sound
Like you were protecting cause your around,
Yet didn't know or contemplate
Your words have sealed my saddened state.

Hugs can only heal some wounds
But what you said was really rude.
It's not now you that sleeps alone
Think before you burst my balloon

Green spring comes a sign of turn,
Yet summer brings brown grass and burn
Autumn mysterious in red and fall
Winters snow brings fun for all.

Your concept intrigues me and masters images of battles and struggles, yet vivid imagery.

Bumped

Bumped

You just have it love, your words are just capable of making or breaking. So eloquent and so well done, I admire your heart, just took a long time to see it, very well done xxx

My souls grow thin
Fully worn too
But my feet will carry
Me and get me through

On my hands I'll crawl
With scabbed knees
I will find you
Like a summer breeze

I relate to words from experience, it's what you are, where you travelled but what you are, I agree the pen talks not always you. It has a mind of its own. Very good

I like this. Very beautiful. Nice words

Bumping this, watched something that brought it all back

More than grateful all xx

Thank you all, very kind words, for my wife

Thanks dolphin, words can't express loss, but words live forever, thanks

The words were delicate, touched you shared more. Thoughts to you

Coming on 5 years Bro. God bless