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As the eye of heaven dips deep in the sky
I stand facing west with a tear in my eye, It’s deep orange beams cast one final wave and right there & then, in the same light we bathe. However, as is with its daily chore, on Its anticlockwise journey it still must endure. During a magnificent glow, a celestial blush I reach forth my heart, almost unheard, just a hush, to grant me a deed on Its west-worldly rush to connect me and you with the warmth of its touch. So with the cloak of darkness and the flow of the night does beg the Suns grace for the ebb of Its light. I have asked its last light, its very best ray to shine down on you as it passes your way. Through dusk until dawn I’ll be your nights Knight, my torch of endearment will burn evils plight. My Sleeping Beauty has now awoke to the morning song of the birds, a soft chorus is spoke Your guardian will rest now, tired and worn I’ll be there forever, to you I am sworn |
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I generally associate west with death... yours breathes life.
Nicely done.  Welcome too, btw... |
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Thank you for taking the time to read it and your kind words
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Welcome to Mingle..Nice write..
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i picture world's apart, but one heart,,,, touching.
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i picture world's apart, but one heart,,,, touching. well observed, it read as it should have, many tears in those words thank you |
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It tears at every heart to have to watch someone you love leave this world.
"With feelings from the heart will indeed bring the tears" |
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It tears at every heart to have to watch someone you love leave this world. "With feelings from the heart will indeed bring the tears" Tazz my complete thoughts to you, |
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It tears at every heart to have to watch someone you love leave this world. "With feelings from the heart will indeed bring the tears" Tazz my complete thoughts to you, Thank you sir my Thoughts are indeed with your lost. A nurse said to me after my wife left this world. "Cancer is like the sun it touches the faces of everyone" |
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You really loved them...
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As the eye of heaven dips deep in the sky I stand facing west with a tear in my eye, It’s deep orange beams cast one final wave and right there & then, in the same light we bathe. However, as is with its daily chore, on Its anticlockwise journey it still must endure. During a magnificent glow, a celestial blush I reach forth my heart, almost unheard, just a hush, to grant me a deed on Its west-worldly rush to connect me and you with the warmth of its touch. So with the cloak of darkness and the flow of the night does beg the Suns grace for the ebb of Its light. I have asked its last light, its very best ray to shine down on you as it passes your way. Through dusk until dawn I’ll be your nights Knight, my torch of endearment will burn evils plight. My Sleeping Beauty has now awoke to the morning song of the birds, a soft chorus is spoke Your guardian will rest now, tired and worn I’ll be there forever, to you I am sworn I agree with Ted...This breathes not only life into the deepest sorrow, but hope into the living.... 
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As the eye of heaven dips deep in the sky I stand facing west with a tear in my eye, It’s deep orange beams cast one final wave and right there & then, in the same light we bathe. However, as is with its daily chore, on Its anticlockwise journey it still must endure. During a magnificent glow, a celestial blush I reach forth my heart, almost unheard, just a hush, to grant me a deed on Its west-worldly rush to connect me and you with the warmth of its touch. So with the cloak of darkness and the flow of the night does beg the Suns grace for the ebb of Its light. I have asked its last light, its very best ray to shine down on you as it passes your way. Through dusk until dawn I’ll be your nights Knight, my torch of endearment will burn evils plight. My Sleeping Beauty has now awoke to the morning song of the birds, a soft chorus is spoke Your guardian will rest now, tired and worn I’ll be there forever, to you I am sworn Tears and cheeks still are my friends I agree with Ted...This breathes not only life into the deepest sorrow, but hope into the living.... |
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I like the way you worded it.
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this appeals to my romantic side...verynice.
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thank you Leigh, seems i didn't manage to comment.↲ thank you Rawwr and tb, much obligied by your kind words,
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Beautiful write....
 So many lives weaved into the tapestry of the Creator. |
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Beautiful write.... So many lives weaved into the tapestry of the Creator. |
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I admire your gift with words. Beautiful.
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I admire your gift with words. Beautiful. |
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As the eye of heaven dips deep in the sky I stand facing west with a tear in my eye, It’s deep orange beams cast one final wave and right there & then, in the same light we bathe. However, as is with its daily chore, on Its anticlockwise journey it still must endure. During a magnificent glow, a celestial blush I reach forth my heart, almost unheard, just a hush, to grant me a deed on Its west-worldly rush to connect me and you with the warmth of its touch. So with the cloak of darkness and the flow of the night does beg the Suns grace for the ebb of Its light. I have asked its last light, its very best ray to shine down on you as it passes your way. Through dusk until dawn I’ll be your nights Knight, my torch of endearment will burn evils plight. My Sleeping Beauty has now awoke to the morning song of the birds, a soft chorus is spoke Your guardian will rest now, tired and worn I’ll be there forever, to you I am sworn |
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