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Sat 04/27/13 11:27 PM

I can be patient sometimes and can enjoy just sitting in my garden for hours at a time. If I had a penny for every flower I've watched over the years..... I'd be a very rich lady laugh But I'm rich enough just being able to see (and sometimes smell) the flowers bigsmile Your poetic thought was a nice read.


Thank you. You're on your way on becoming a hummingbird. ;)

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Sat 04/27/13 09:34 AM

Did you know that Hummingbirds can fly backward?...Nice thoughts in this one Steven!flowerforyou


Thank you. :) Sorry, I wasn't aware about that. I've noticed hummingbirds just moving about a particular flower of its choice and just floating for a long time analyzing it until it takes the plunge of extracting the nectar.

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Sat 04/27/13 09:31 AM
Edited by Unknow on Sat 04/27/13 09:35 AM

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Thu 04/25/13 10:59 PM

What a nice rhyme. Hehe.
Yeah, this is a piece where human is impatient to solved the puzzle.




Exactly....humans species are actually impatient.

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Thu 04/25/13 09:56 AM
A friend in need is a friend indeed.

When we get that breed its a blessing indeed.

Just like a creek that flows downstream,

So does that friend guides us clean.

Times are trying when one is alone,

A course of thoughts erodes our soul.

Lend a hand with a heart of gold,

And it shall return with joy untold.

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Thu 04/25/13 09:49 AM
Sitting in the class with the professor yapping,

All the more boring with my restless feet tapping.


Blessed is he who can follow what's happening,

I, for one, can only hear babbling.


Blah! Blah! Blah! is all i can hear,

Banging with boredom, so is everyone here.


On and on the professor goes on yapping,

But I'm waiting for the bell to say "I'm ringing!"

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Thu 04/25/13 09:42 AM


like that very organic flowerforyou
Exactly what I was thinking. flowerforyou

Great write Steven. happy


Thank you.

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Tue 04/23/13 11:21 PM

Excellent write...smokin


Thank you.

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Tue 04/23/13 11:01 PM

liked this.happy flowers drinker


Thank you. :)

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Tue 04/23/13 12:39 PM

like that very organic flowerforyou


Thank you.

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Tue 04/23/13 12:20 PM
An extra mile is an extra smile...


The extra mile could be a thousand miles...


I may have to try a thousands tries...


To pass the crimes of a thousand lies...


And all my tries are filled with cries...


But i'll forever strive to see you smile...

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Tue 04/23/13 12:15 PM
How many times have you seen a flower blossom?


How many tries did you take to see it jostle?


How many times did you get yourself jumbled?


To see how many petals does each of them buckle.


Not a human soul can track this hustle,


Only the hummingbird has the patience to solve this puzzle.

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Tue 04/23/13 12:11 PM

good read:smile:


Thank you

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Tue 04/23/13 12:01 PM

Like the content. drinker


Thank you.

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Tue 04/23/13 04:39 AM

Loved it!!!!!happy :banana:


Glad u did. Thanx.

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Tue 04/23/13 04:39 AM

Nice write flowerforyou Welcome to mingle and the creative writing forum.


Thank you.

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Sun 04/21/13 09:35 AM
A spark of fire was the only beginning,

That spark of fire was intensely threatening.

The cribs of the forest was engulfed in a flaming frenzy,

For one spark of fire led to a gigantic flaming.

In the aftermath of the fierceful blazing,

Scenes of it's destruction could be seen with a sorrowful feeling.

But the dreadful beating came with a disguised blessing,

For it brought a revived hope of a brand new seeding.

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Sun 04/21/13 09:31 AM
On tips and toes we travelled together,

In each other's arms we've held one another.

So many years have gone by, no wonder!

Many more years yet to come, what wonder!


Through think and thin we held on forever,

Passing every test that seemed forever.

Let's take a chance and make it a wonder,

Cuz being with you, really, is a wonder.

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Sun 04/21/13 09:09 AM

drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup:


Thank you.

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Sun 04/21/13 09:08 AM

:smile: cool. laugh


Thank you.