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G'morn(((2KMoM)))Hmmm!let's see what's on the menu to start this fine day upon the right note.Oooo!look,it's java & warm cinnamon rolls.Yummy:)~ Have a bearific day sweetie.Godspeed!Cy
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Ajar
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And yet... none of you said anything until I commented. Interesting. Guess why that is? None of you can recognize a decent poem when you see one. I have suffered reading some of the poems posted here, and let me tell you, no Keats, no Brownings, no Eliots reside here. The closest to those I've seen here is the gentleman in question. And, no, his poem would be much improved *without* that line for the reasons I stated. Sorry, poetry--real poetry--isn't just a bunch of emotional fluff. It's structure. It's imagery. It's art. Real poetry might actually take time and be somewhat difficult, even unpleasant, to write; it might actually force you to think (gasp!) and write and re-rewrite, then write again, your thoughts. Some poems take years to write. The ones that take less than years, less than weeks, must come from an exceptionally gifted mind. Guess how many people meet that qualification? Harsh? Well, reality often is. 
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Hi
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Welcome!Chloe to Mingle
 p.s.a beautiful name indeed.Godspeed!CyPoet |
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peace within myself
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unblock someone
Edited by
CyPoet
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All this harshness & pain from a simple wink.Good-Bye!cruel world for I shall perish henceforth from mine own sword.Fair well dear lady.
 
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What are you entitled to?
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Foot Hold
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I Go
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New to the site
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Welcome!N/S
& Welcome!KtG |
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Delete my account
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Actually I think I read a hairless clause somewhere;-) 
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I'm new member
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Welcome join in the forums a lot of great people here (((pkh))) Godspeed!Cy
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I'm new member
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Welcome!to Mingleland.:)
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The Dock
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The conversation
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The cut
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over the rainbow
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my spirit
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Want
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Such beautiful expression.
Godspeed!Cy
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Oh well, I'm the type of guy who will never settle down
Where pretty girls are well, you know that I'm around I kiss 'em and I love 'em 'cause to me they're all the same I hug 'em and I squeeze 'em they don't even know my name They call me the wanderer Yeah, the wanderer I roam around, around, around Oh well, there's Flo on my left and there's Mary on my right And Janie is the girl with that I'll be with tonight And when she asks me, which one I love the best? I tear open my shirt I got Rosie on my chest 'Cause I'm the wanderer Yeah, the wanderer I roam around, around, around Oh well, I roam from town to town I go through life without a care And I'm as happy as a clown I with my two fists of iron and I'm going nowhere I'm the type of guy that likes to roam around I'm never in one place, I roam from town to town And when I find myself fallin' for some girl I hop right into that car of mine and ride around the world Yeah I'm the wanderer Yeah, the wanderer I roam around, around, around Oh yeah, I'm the type of guy that likes to roam around I'm never in one place, I roam from town to town And when I find myself a-fallin' for some girl I hop right into that car of mine and drive around the world Yeah, 'cause I'm a wanderer Yeah, a wanderer I roam around, around, around 'Cause I'm a wanderer Yeah, a wanderer I roam around, around, around Oooops!Sowwwwy  I was havin' a 50's flashback there for a moment. But seriously it's a great deal more fun roaming through the various forums and you get to meet some new peeps also.It's a win-win scenario.Woo-Hoo! Godspeed!CyPoet |
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Edited by
CyPoet
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Tue 08/06/13 05:11 AM
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G'morn(((2KMoM)))I've come w/ java & rasberry struddles to start off the day on a great note.Mmmm!Yummy:)~ K:here's the first of 22 that I've collected so far.I'll post one each day.Hopefully,I'll find more of them as I go along in my travels through this interesting thing we call LIFE.lol:)Have a bearific day my dear friend.Godspeed!Cy
 
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