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The Walk of a Shaman~
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You, Ladywind, and technovative honestly inspire me. I think you all exceptional poets and reading your work allows me to grow as I write. And this poem doesn't disappoint.
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Never Real
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Never Real
It is a relentless mist falling like a subtle reminder that the storm has yet to pass Its whispers reveal the sound of the thunder that tears me apart as if my soul's thirst needed to be quenched by a never ending pain Love unfair are the secrets that fall like raindrops from the heavens muddying trust with the confusion that exposes the roots of forever It is a relentless mist that reveals the darkness once painted so beautiful by the light of not knowing it was never real |
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Working man thoughts
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I am always amazed by your work. You take thoughts and lead them to the reader's soul. I so appreciate reading your work!!!!! And this is simply another fine write that takes me on a journey
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Listening
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Listening
I spoke twice and listened once maybe that was my first mistake I spoke the first time without understanding anything you felt because I knew how I felt I listened your words your pain changed me and I know now who we are I spoke again and I hope you hear me I'm sorry I'm so very sorry |
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Muffled
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Muffled
Tears articulated the questions that poured from my soul as the depth of emptiness was encased within the picture the mirror painted The art of sorrow abstract like the memories I've tried to forget doesn't hurt as much as the memories I cannot forget I try silence as if I have nothing to say yet the screams within my heart tells the story of just how much this has left me speechless Dying too often is like the whispers that are loud enough to hear yet too muffled to really understand and only time can answer the questions that pour from my soul |
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Love
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Were I blind, I would still understand that word which is a language of it's own. I hear it in the two honks of a car horn when a neighbour departs his family. I feel it when it rains. Cats and dogs nest in your lap, damp and comforted. I smell it when my spouse cooks my favorite meal. The burning wicks, the aroma of freshly picked flowers, it is our constant companion, dining at our table. If I were not blind, I could find manuscripts dedicated to this word, craving to get it just right in feather and pen. It has been carved on trees, in caves and tattooed on flesh. Worn on finger, wrist and neck, even a daisy chain to crown Mother with it. The grasp of newborn fingers elicits it, and when you receive a warm smile that smoulders like an anointing over you, know you have been touched by it. It is instinctual. At towering bridges it posts 'post it' notes. They hold on to you, not allowing you to jump, as your tears stream to join the waters that flow to the sea - reminding you we are one. There is art in your words!!!! |
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Mired in the Sun's Rain
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Another painterly piece written with eloquence, mig. Appreciate the kind words from someone who I think is a master of the word |
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From Winter to Spring
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I agree love his style. looking forward to seeing more from him Thank you!!! |
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From Winter to Spring
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One of your best poems ever Mig. The second stanza is amazing.
I am so humbled!!! You inspire me so much so all I can truly say is thank you |
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Unfair
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Unfair
Heavy Painful hurt like happiness abandoned in the middle of time's most precious moment Never thought that before me I would mourn you I want to ask why yet it doesn't matter there is no reason why death hurts so much and even more when a child dies |
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Mired in the Sun's Rain
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Mired in the Sun's Rain
I want to be mired in the moment when the sun's passion slowly awakens the dark with elegant strokes of light that paints dawn the color of everything beautiful To inhale and feel the day's awakening within the depths of my soul as if time was giving the new day the breath to reveal night's secrets And slowly as time passes exhale the heartaches to the rhythm of the sun's rain as my thoughts drown in the morning dew's glistening brilliance I want to be mired in the freedom of shadows that no longer fear the regrets of yesterday to be the me that dances as if the world is watching and know that I am alive |
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Swindled by Shepherds
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Yep, another great poem!!!!
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Stretched Across
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Stretched Across
Random lines of uncomfortable love stretch across her femininity like beautiful scars They are seemingly woven into her flesh by time and life anew Defining her as a mother defining her as a caregiver defining her as the strongest person who will ever live |
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my shadow
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I really love this!!
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Slow Moving Lava
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Slow Moving Lava
Your love is like a liquid flame pouring over me like a fire burning the depths of the secrets I've kept hidden in the darkness of my fears As the radiant glow within every drop of your slow moving lava ravages me with a sweet pain that delicately melts the wall of ice that protected me I want to scream from the deliciously searing pain of your touch yet only moans fill the air as you discover my soul with a light as bright as the sun's tomorrow rising I am in love torched by the possibilities of you and I forever in the light of the sun's today fading beauty |
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Slow Moving Lava
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Slow Moving Lava
Your love is like a liquid flame pouring over me like a fire burning the depths of the secrets I've kept hidden in the darkness of my fears As the radiant glow within every drop of your slow moving lava ravages me with a sweet pain that delicately melts the wall of ice that protected me I want to scream from the deliciously searing pain of your touch yet only moans fill the air as you discover my soul with a light as bright as the sun's tomorrow rising I am in love torched by the possibilities of you and I forever in the light of the sun's today fading beauty |
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I love this!!
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Topic:
Why I miss you so badly
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I’m so tired of this empty feeling. I’m so tired of being alone. I lay here staring at the ceiling, Waiting by the phone. I wish and I dream That we’ll be together soon. I can’t wait until we can look up hand in hand At the stars and at the moon. I try not to weep. I hope he doesn’t hear my cries, But I can’t stop the tears Falling from my eyes. Every day Every hour Every moment I’m thinking of you through the miles and loving you. Nice!! |
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Topic:
Foggy Day
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Foggy Day
The open curtains reveal the morning's gloomy cold filling with the room with a laziness that seems to have painted the mirror blue leaving my reflection to search for the sunlight's broken promise Staring at the lingering mist makes me want to drown in the comforts of my bed but alas with dread I gently move from the sea of blankets to the kitchen to brew enough warmth that an unmotivated Saturday morning requires Quiet fills the room as the rest of the household enjoys the riches of dreams and I awakened by duty to what will soon be the noise of children and a grumpy hungry spouse get one last vestige of inner peace as the coffee's aroma entwined with the foggy day prepares me for what comes next . . . life |
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An Abstract Evening
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An Abstract Evening
Quietly the unfinished story unfolds as the winds of time slowly yet rhythmically paint the sky abstract hues fused together by a coherent beauty of peaceful serenity Silence engulfs the world with noises that only the soul can feel as the stars welcomes the night with shimmering shadows that paint the abstract hues with dreams as colorful as the imagination The ocean waves goodbye as winds rest and tonight the story finally has its perfect ending |
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The second stanza is amazing.