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Topic: Swindled by Shepherds
technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Wed 04/06/22 01:50 PM
Geriatric despots regurgitate fairy tales ad nauseam, entombing pliable offspring to shrivel just like their crypt keeper faces. Pickling in the salty sweat of slaves for self preservation. Grifting spawn prod the coals and squint for diamonds. Their plastic faces may melt lurking near the pit, alongside neighbors roasting on the spit, the fatty drippings fuel their warped drive. Orphans swindled by shepherds; obey without inquiry or summon the ire of a charlatan!

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54074	Wed 04/06/22 01:56 PM
EXCELLENT

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Wed 04/06/22 08:07 PM
EXCELLENT Thanks, Robin.

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3165	Thu 04/07/22 12:38 AM
Nice poem .

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Thu 04/07/22 12:46 PM
Nice poem . Thanks, Julie.

Kendrill Joined Thu 04/07/22 Posts: 30	Thu 04/07/22 01:12 PM
Brilliant!!

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Thu 04/07/22 03:18 PM
Brilliant!! Thanks for your feedback, Kendrill.

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1525	Sat 04/09/22 10:59 PM
Yep, another great poem!!!!

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Sun 04/10/22 01:38 PM
Yep, another great poem!!!! Your kind feedback is appreciated, mig.

LarchTree Joined Fri 11/22/19 Posts: 935	Sun 04/10/22 02:05 PM
Awesome! What about the leaders who humiliate those stronger than them but below them, to prevent any threat to their authority?

LarchTree Joined Fri 11/22/19 Posts: 935	Sun 04/10/22 02:23 PM
What is the sense of purpose for the underbearers? The deep value?

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Mon 04/11/22 02:08 PM
Awesome! What about the leaders who humiliate those stronger than them but below them, to prevent any threat to their authority? Thanks for having a look and sharing your thoughts, Lane. A bullies "leadership" has to be challenged to expose them as the weak phony they typically are. That's often the catalyst required to disarm the real threat, that being their mob of followers duped by fear and lies.

LarchTree Joined Fri 11/22/19 Posts: 935	Tue 04/12/22 03:07 AM Edited by LarchTree on Tue 04/12/22 03:10 AM
Nice :-)

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