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Sun 12/10/06 08:10 PM
Your poem was very touching. Sometimes you need to write what is in
your heart to share with others to lesson the pain. It is so hard to
lose someone you care about and I think even harder to find another
special someone to share your life with. Thank you for sharing your poem
with us.

I write poems myself but most are about my dreams. This is one I wrote.

Treasured Memory

The moon in its splendor
Casts its warmth upon the blackened waters.
Silence is all around except for the birds heard in the distance
And the sound of the lovers hearts beating as they embrace.
The lovers watch in fascination
As the waters' waves caresses and distorts the moon’s beauty,
Rippling its reflection in so many layers.
The moon’s warmth touches their faces
And brings them ever closer in their togetherness.
They embrace and kiss softly, enjoying their passion and love.
The moon casts its' glow upon them
And watches intently.
This moment is embedded in their hearts forever.
A treasured memory, not soon forgotten.

Maybe one day this will be your treasured memory or mine.