"MB one":

Keep us abreast of any success you have got after all the profile modifications you did.

Ditch the fixed income and unemployed thing.
Its not a shining star in the dating world.

Sure, and we all get that but we aren't looking to date you but to give you the advice you asked.
We get what you mean, but it doesn't come across like that.
A profile is selling yourself, and it should be like an invite which means, open, interesting, positive. So convey your message in a different way that comes across as that. Meaning, rephrase.
Like one can say, "Shut the door!" (order) or "Shut the door please." The difference is in the tone of voice.
But geezzz... I shouldn't have to explain that. It ain't rocket science.

Most important one on a dating site is your photo. If that isn't good you're not getting any traction. Yours is not good. No one will be attracted to or interested in a grumpy looking person. --> Get a new one with a smile.


FROM YOUR PROFILE TEXT:
-Hi. I can't see likes. --> delete this

-There are have are a lot of times I have done something nice for someone. --> correct this sentence. Get your sentence structure right.

-If who don't have a profile picture of yourself don't message me. --> delete this, off-putting as it's negative. Also, why do you expect women to message you? Why not be proactive and message them? And again: Get your sentence structure right!!


- I only want people that are serious about friends or a relationship to message me. --> why do you expect women to message you? Why not be proactive and message them? Delete it.


- If you want to know more, please ask me. ---> delete. Unless you're a superstar and you have a big fanclub no one will ask you anything. YOU got to sell YOU.

- Profession: Maybe I'll tell you later on. ---> Oh? What's with the secrecy? Don't have a job? What are you hiding that you "Maybe" tell it later??? This isn't looking good. Fill it out honestly.

Also, add what kind of woman or man and relationship you're looking for.
As it is your profile is bad.
You get a 1 for effort and reacting to replies to your question here. That doesn't change the fact that your profile is bad.

Most important one on a dating site is your photo. If that isn't good you're not getting any traction. Yours is not good. No one will be attracted to or interested in a grumpy looking person. --> Get a new one with a smile.


FROM YOUR PROFILE TEXT:
-Hi. I can't see likes. --> delete this

-There are have are a lot of times I have done something nice for someone. --> correct this sentence. Get your sentence structure right.

-If who don't have a profile picture of yourself don't message me. --> delete this, off-putting as it's negative. Also, why do you expect women to message you? Why not be proactive and message them? And again: Get your sentence structure right!!


- I only want people that are serious about friends or a relationship to message me. --> why do you expect women to message you? Why not be proactive and message them? Delete it.


- If you want to know more, please ask me. ---> delete. Unless you're a superstar and you have a big fanclub no one will ask you anything. YOU got to sell YOU.

- Profession: Maybe I'll tell you later on. ---> Oh? What's with the secrecy? Don't have a job? What are you hiding that you "Maybe" tell it later??? This isn't looking good. Fill it out honestly.

Also, add what kind of woman or man and relationship you're looking for.
As it is your profile is bad.
You get a 1 for effort and reacting to replies to your question here. That doesn't change the fact that your profile is bad.