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Dingle, Barry
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Midas Welle
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Mustaph Ben Ayleans
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Topic:
Breaking Up With the Old Me
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Thanks for checking it out folks.
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Mired in the Sun's Rain
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Another painterly piece written with eloquence, mig.
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Topic:
Breaking Up With the Old Me
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The pale frown
of this porcelain mask is next to fire in a thespians cold kiln. An actor bearing no striking match. A fun house reflection jailed between walls within the mirror. This sideshow spoken in tongues upstaged by the man quietly talking with his hands. The pop of that whipping white flag clips the loudspeakers amplitude while failing to smother my keystroke punches. Take that weak font face and move. That type no longer suits me! |
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Big Footed Baby Steps
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Thanks for the feedback, Robin & Julie.
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Big Footed Baby Steps
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Two feet ahead
toe to ankle in line, just twenty four inches... plus or minus point nine. My arm outstretched sans a measuring tape, zero air space between no gap or gape. Size thirteen's crushing a clod, leaving prints sole deep bending over the sod. Dirt from the roots caked in cross hatch treads. Thirsty mosquito's swarm 'round my head. Holding still in a garden gnome pose pant leg is wet from the split leaking hose. Two feet ahead an upturned rakes tines twenty four more inches toe to ankle in line. |
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Grecian Dreamscape
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I love it!! Thank you. |
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Grecian Dreamscape
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Nice poem . As always, thank you for checking it out and for your acknowledgement, Julie. |
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Grecian Dreamscape
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VERY NICE Your feedback is appreciated, Robin. |
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Topic:
Grecian Dreamscape
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Star glitter charges the air
pelting my corona as I soar through the Pegasus's turbulence... wing thrusts of the airborne steed flinging meteor chips over me. As the griffin swoops past Orion's belt above, Poseidon thrusts his trident through the gargantuan squid's tentacle beneath the Caspian sea. Medusa's serpent dread's are in a frenzied whip as she wallops me with her flaming scepter. Hercules chariot now racing me from Pompeii as the volcano erupts, filling the streets with molten lava and blanketing the sky with smoke and ash. |
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Casting Mettle
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Thanks for digging this one up and commenting, Robin & Julie.
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Topic:
Swindled by Shepherds
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Awesome! What about the leaders who humiliate those stronger than them but below them, to prevent any threat to their authority? Thanks for having a look and sharing your thoughts, Lane. A bullies "leadership" has to be challenged to expose them as the weak phony they typically are. That's often the catalyst required to disarm the real threat, that being their mob of followers duped by fear and lies. |
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Prince Cory Nation
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Topic:
Swindled by Shepherds
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Yep, another great poem!!!! Your kind feedback is appreciated, mig. |
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Topic:
Swindled by Shepherds
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Brilliant!! Thanks for your feedback, Kendrill. |
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Topic:
Swindled by Shepherds
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Nice poem . Thanks, Julie. |
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Topic:
Swindled by Shepherds
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EXCELLENT Thanks, Robin. |
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Cal A. Mazu
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