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Ocean of Life
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Good stuff, I love the metaphors.
A+++ |
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Topic:
Haven't We Met?
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Awesome write.
I enjoyed this one very much A++++ |
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Topic:
Following Me
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Very good write
A+++ Thank you for sharing, I hope to see more |
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Topic:
Stalk Her
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One Perspective Oh, Jesus Christ Another message Light blinking What is this man thinking? Or is he? Night after night Taking such delight In flooding my aura My hearing My sight with Lewd lascivious Desires to Own me Touch me Undress and Possess me A woman he’s Never … …Even met … I suppose that Will teach me To try to be kind To a clearly Lonely, warped Unloved mind His soul Aching for Resurrection So desperate For connection In a world Deliberately Passing him by Ignored Unwanted Now I see why… Godammit It’s ringing Can't you just Leave me alone? I want to be Able to pick up My phone without Hearing the Heavy broken voice of celibate Desires Unquenched fires Saturating my Hearing with His wanting …. Im being Stalked Victimized Terrorized Vandalized My thoughts And words Stolen Looted Polluted Manipulated Diluted By a strangers idea Of “love” perverted And diverted Aimed ... ...My way … Is there no disguise In which to hide From these Probing Voyeuristic eyes? ~~ Another Perspective Oh, look at her words Gloriously heard Solely in my mind as I read them convinced She cries out in a Night echoing With pain from Love torn wounds Only I can hear … and heal… How I long To feel her Skin shimmering White trembling In delight bathed In love starved Lingering kisses Laid upon a Body unknown Yet hungered for … Desires inspired By this verbal Siren I Close my eyes Almost feeling Her presence Breathing deeply Of her essence Unknowingly Consumed by The fires she’s Ignited with her Written words… No one Understands her The way I do … Perhaps I should Pick up my pen Remind her Yet again … I must open her Her eyes Force her To see She belongs To me Destined to be Mine … …Forever… March 2009 Now that's some good stuff right there *said in a southern voice* bravo MsWizard I rate this a and 11 out of 10 |
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Topic:
My Poetry
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Bravo to romance and words of love.
congrats you two |
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Topic:
If I don't see you
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I think it sucks, you really have no talent, in better words "BOOOOOOOOOO, get off the stage"
>.< haha ohhh silly |
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Topic:
A conversation with myself
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Ok, when are you going to get some sleep?
I don't know, when I feel like it, stop bothering me with that crap, I have a clock right in front of me. wow, didn't mean to pinch a nerve, you need to calm the down. umm no, I'm fine, you need to leave me the hell alone, I'll go to sleep when I can't keep my eyes open long enough to find my bed or the couch. you know, you're not the only one here, I need to get some rest as well so I can make the logical decisions for us because we all know you cant. oh cry me a river, you don't need to worry about a damn thing, just go away and let me do what I gotta do. please guys, can't we all just get along? oh great, you woke up this sappy little twit. Noo, I was simply suggesting we go to sleep, because that's the logical thing to do, but you're so damn angry all the time you can't see logic. yeah, well it's too bad I hear you all the time talking in my ear telling me crap I don't care about. common guys, let's just breath and calm down. shut your mouth hippy, one more word out of you and I'll pluck all the petals off the next flower I see. HAHA yer at it again I see you buch of knuckle heads. oh this is perfect, now the clown is here. Farewell cruel world. oh my GOD, who invited the emo child, why don't you go cry a river and let the men talk. You know that's not wise of you, you know he gets depressed when you pick on him like that. So what, tell him to write a poem about it, little cry baby is always ranting about the end, makes me sick. Your world will end, you're just a pawn. SHUT UP! no one cares about what you think, go comb your hair or something! calm down, your going to have a break down. DUDE, TAKE YOUR ADVICE AND SHOVE IT SOO FAR UP YOUR REAR END IT COMES OUT IN CHINA! please guys, lets just group hug and forgive one another. Hey daisy, that will happen when hell freezes over, now I'm serious, go as far away from me as you can and I'll tell you when you can come out. HAHA this ones on FIRE, someone grab some water! HAHA OK THAT'S IT, COME HERE, I'M GOING TO MAKE WALL PAPER OUT OF YOU! HAHA catch me if you can. Calm down, Caalllmmmm dooowwwnnnn, just breath, count back from ten. You have three seconds to get the hell out of here.... THREE! start running! oy, how was I dragged into being the mediator with such a group? You would start running if you knew what was good for you smart guy! I love you, now and forever, come close and let us hold one another. ohh nooo romeo, you get your sentimental hands the hell away from me. Don't fight it, embrace love and live happy. Kiss my ass, every time you get shot down I'm the one that has to pick us up, you're a worthless piece of work. Enough! all of you, I'm taking charge here, FALL IN LINE MAGETS! Are you kidding me, it's a damn reunion here, now captain commando wants to lead the ship, well you know what I say, SCREW YOU JAR HEAD, I'm leading this vessel. Stand down soldier, don't make me restrain you, I will use force if you make me. I would do what he says, remember what happened last time. Stay out of this turbo, I'll ask your opinion when I want it. uh ohh, I told you we should have hugged and made up, but noooo. This cruel dark place is my tomb for all times. WHAT DO YOU NO GET ABOUT SHUT THE HELL UP CRY BABY FLOWER POWER frickafrac'sgtkq!? There he goes... FREEZE! stand down, I SAID STAND DOWN! HAHA let's get ready to rumbllllllle... By: Roberto Loera ©March2009 |
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It depends on what size gun you want to use and what style, plus I'm not sure what sound you're looking for.
There's the 9mm smith and wesson colt 45 beretta 92 Ruger there's double action and single action revolvers semi automatic pistols break action pistols bolt action pistols there's a nice range of clabbers as well there's a 357. a 44. a45. a 480. a 454. and 500. there's also ammunition types Jacketed hollow point: for self-defense Jacketed round nose: for defense practice Jacketed soft point: for hunting small game Unjacketed wadcutter: for target shooting Jacketed flat point: for practice, target shooting Unjacketed round nose: for inexpensive practice and that's only a little about handguns. I'm not sure if you wanted to use a rifle for this scene |
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Topic:
If I don't see you
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I've lost myself
the best of me with every moment past a vanishing recipe and no care to stop it no urge to save me from me why I ask to thee why me what have I to give what right to live what foresight worth seeing out of this cold night this cold blight eating away at me with one bite it's too big my fathers first born first and only kin until just then twenty one years later when now we both are men damn him damn me to oblivion I curse this life I've been given been living with all my heart that's grief stricken no more flowers for me worth picking smelling of sweet pallon perfume never again a hermit maybe but free from rejection false affection the universes neglecting only seeing my complexion not my brain my soul my auras burning flame gone out from my tears that once fell like the rain my feet have given up the walk my lips sealed tight from talk my arms and fingers stuck in one spot without me I only rot searching for better days I think it's only a thought but I can't do this on my own I'm not that strong when I'm not whole what is a king without his throne what is a man when he's all alone where is my will who hath taken my speed and skill my love for life the fear, pain, joy and thrill that put me in the highest flight does no one see this but me with blurred sight have I become a statistic a cynical man blinded by his lack of sanity rapped up in the worlds vanity his delusions of reality speaking to deaf ears of blasphemy if I should fall off this place would it matter would you call it a tragedy if I should shatter fall apart like cracking paint splatters over the edge without a rope or latter in the darkest place with only faint echos of laughter to taunt me to haunt me and only more time passing by between night and day to float me away to empty black sand shores where washed away footsteps can't been seen anymore I beg you to listen there was once a time I adored you a drank you in with morning dew when you and I were once both new but somehow someway I have forgotten you as you have forgotten me forgot what my meaning was what I was meant to do I have no clue are you done with me are we now through or will you lift me up once more and fortify me with your glue your embracing hug that makes me new your strong pure love your skies of blue that makes me whole again I miss you and that's the only thing that I know to be true ©March2009 :Roberto Loera |
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Topic:
Merlot
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I'm so glad that you all dropped in and shared with me, thank you all for your comments
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Topic:
Merlot
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Thank you all very much for your comments =)
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Topic:
When is When (chanced)
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Yay! I love'em.
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Topic:
Merlot
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Excellent! ![]() ![]() |
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Topic:
Merlot
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Your lips taste of bittersweet
I caress your face and slide mine against your cheek Your eyes spark fires in darkness light the night our lips will never tire your salty skin my hardened body together wrapped in sin twice used air gasping for more with gentle pulling of your hair only two left in the world sculpted together like sand in the ocean forms a pearl Hard and soft around we gravitate finding ourselves lost Drinking you like life force rejuvenated by the dew forever us against the times secured by trust no need for cheap lines lovers wrapped in silk stimulated by our minds together in bliss now come here lover and lets consecrate this ©2009March By: Roberto Loera |
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Topic:
The Last Ballet
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This was not suppose to happen
I curse the devil dragon taken away just before yesterday now what ells can I say that you will hear begging please no into deaf ears almost all out of tears robbed of my fears my emotions numb to counseling peers who only understand that I cant stand and crawl damning Gods plan don't let go of my hand what must I do unraveling without my glue without you sleeping with unrest the weight of the whole ocean crashing onto my chest cant breath why did you have to leave dried salt crystals upon my sleeves horrible days passing by though I try no amount of pulling can get me back into the sky dreams have left the clouds and sparkles from my eyes you were so proud now I'm ashamed to speak out loud your name the pain shrouds I blame myself for every moment I wasted for every tear you tasted fragmented pieces pasted into envelopes hidden in a musty basement entrapped in walls of cement only remembered in my last song a sorrowful lament Roberto Loera ©March2009 |
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wow I thought that this had died down, but I came back to see that it had gotten a few more hits
![]() Thank you all so much for reading and commenting on it, and even if you just dropped by to see what was going on |
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thank you for your comments
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Stalking you
wanting me hiding in shadows waiting for the opportune moment then pouncing yet you embrace it death breathing down your neck and you turn to face it feeling me on your skin raised flesh broken bracelet pulsating chest quivering breaths you can taste it quiet whimpers worm shivers never quick biting lips breath my air sweat drips epic ©2009 Feb. Roberto Loera |
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Topic:
Security
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very nice |
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Topic:
Security
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Very nicely done! ![]() |
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