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RawB's photo
Tue 03/31/09 08:18 PM
Good stuff, I love the metaphors.
A+++


RawB's photo
Tue 03/31/09 08:16 PM
Awesome write.
I enjoyed this one very much
A++++


RawB's photo
Tue 03/31/09 08:13 PM
Very good write
A+++
Thank you for sharing, I hope to see more

RawB's photo
Tue 03/31/09 08:10 PM

One Perspective

Oh, Jesus Christ
Another message
Light blinking
What is this man thinking?
Or is he?
Night after night
Taking such delight
In flooding my aura
My hearing
My sight with
Lewd lascivious
Desires to
Own me
Touch me
Undress and
Possess me
A woman he’s
Never …
…Even met …

I suppose that
Will teach me
To try to be kind
To a clearly
Lonely, warped
Unloved mind
His soul
Aching for
Resurrection
So desperate
For connection
In a world
Deliberately
Passing him by
Ignored
Unwanted

Now
I see why…

Godammit
It’s ringing
Can't you just
Leave me alone?
I want to be
Able to pick up
My phone without
Hearing the
Heavy broken voice
of celibate
Desires
Unquenched fires
Saturating my
Hearing with
His wanting ….

Im being
Stalked
Victimized
Terrorized
Vandalized
My thoughts
And words
Stolen
Looted
Polluted
Manipulated
Diluted
By a strangers idea
Of “love” perverted
And diverted
Aimed ...
...My way …

Is there no disguise
In which to hide
From these
Probing
Voyeuristic eyes?

~~

Another Perspective

Oh, look at her words
Gloriously heard
Solely in my mind as
I read them convinced
She cries out in a
Night echoing
With pain from
Love torn wounds
Only I can hear
… and heal…

How I long
To feel her
Skin shimmering
White trembling
In delight bathed
In love starved
Lingering kisses
Laid upon a
Body unknown
Yet hungered for …

Desires inspired
By this verbal
Siren I
Close my eyes
Almost feeling
Her presence
Breathing deeply
Of her essence
Unknowingly
Consumed by
The fires she’s
Ignited with her
Written words…

No one
Understands her
The way I do …

Perhaps I should
Pick up my pen
Remind her
Yet again …

I must open her
Her eyes
Force her
To see
She belongs
To me
Destined to be
Mine …

…Forever…


March 2009


Now that's some good stuff right there *said in a southern voice*
bravo MsWizard
I rate this a and 11 out of 10


RawB's photo
Tue 03/31/09 08:03 PM
Bravo to romance and words of love.
congrats you two

RawB's photo
Tue 03/31/09 10:18 AM
I think it sucks, you really have no talent, in better words "BOOOOOOOOOO, get off the stage"

>.< haha ohhh silly

RawB's photo
Tue 03/31/09 10:17 AM
Ok, when are you going to get some sleep?

I don't know, when I feel like it, stop bothering me with that crap, I have a clock right in front of me.

wow, didn't mean to pinch a nerve, you need to calm the down.

umm no, I'm fine, you need to leave me the hell alone, I'll go to sleep when I can't keep my eyes open long enough to find my bed or the couch.

you know, you're not the only one here, I need to get some rest as well so I can make the logical decisions for us because we all know you cant.

oh cry me a river, you don't need to worry about a damn thing, just go away and let me do what I gotta do.

please guys, can't we all just get along?

oh great, you woke up this sappy little twit.

Noo, I was simply suggesting we go to sleep, because that's the logical thing to do, but you're so damn angry all the time you can't see logic.

yeah, well it's too bad I hear you all the time talking in my ear telling me crap I don't care about.

common guys, let's just breath and calm down.

shut your mouth hippy, one more word out of you and I'll pluck all the petals off the next flower I see.

HAHA yer at it again I see you buch of knuckle heads.

oh this is perfect, now the clown is here.

Farewell cruel world.

oh my GOD, who invited the emo child, why don't you go cry a river and let the men talk.

You know that's not wise of you, you know he gets depressed when you pick on him like that.

So what, tell him to write a poem about it, little cry baby is always ranting about the end, makes me sick.

Your world will end, you're just a pawn.

SHUT UP! no one cares about what you think, go comb your hair or something!

calm down, your going to have a break down.

DUDE, TAKE YOUR ADVICE AND SHOVE IT SOO FAR UP YOUR REAR END IT COMES OUT IN CHINA!

please guys, lets just group hug and forgive one another.

Hey daisy, that will happen when hell freezes over, now I'm serious, go as far away from me as you can and I'll tell you when you can come out.

HAHA this ones on FIRE, someone grab some water! HAHA

OK THAT'S IT, COME HERE, I'M GOING TO MAKE WALL PAPER OUT OF YOU!

HAHA catch me if you can.

Calm down, Caalllmmmm dooowwwnnnn, just breath, count back from ten.

You have three seconds to get the hell out of here.... THREE! start running!

oy, how was I dragged into being the mediator with such a group?

You would start running if you knew what was good for you smart guy!

I love you, now and forever, come close and let us hold one another.

ohh nooo romeo, you get your sentimental hands the hell away from me.

Don't fight it, embrace love and live happy.

Kiss my ass, every time you get shot down I'm the one that has to pick us up, you're a worthless piece of work.

Enough! all of you, I'm taking charge here, FALL IN LINE MAGETS!

Are you kidding me, it's a damn reunion here, now captain commando wants to lead the ship, well you know what I say, SCREW YOU JAR HEAD, I'm leading this vessel.

Stand down soldier, don't make me restrain you, I will use force if you make me.

I would do what he says, remember what happened last time.

Stay out of this turbo, I'll ask your opinion when I want it.

uh ohh, I told you we should have hugged and made up, but noooo.

This cruel dark place is my tomb for all times.

WHAT DO YOU NO GET ABOUT SHUT THE HELL UP CRY BABY FLOWER POWER frickafrac'sgtkq!?

There he goes...

FREEZE! stand down, I SAID STAND DOWN!

HAHA let's get ready to rumbllllllle...


By: Roberto Loera
©March2009


RawB's photo
Tue 03/31/09 09:03 AM
It depends on what size gun you want to use and what style, plus I'm not sure what sound you're looking for.

There's the 9mm smith and wesson
colt 45
beretta 92
Ruger

there's double action and single action revolvers
semi automatic pistols
break action pistols
bolt action pistols
there's a nice range of clabbers as well

there's a 357.
a 44.
a45.
a 480.
a 454.
and 500.

there's also ammunition types
Jacketed hollow point: for self-defense
Jacketed round nose: for defense practice
Jacketed soft point: for hunting small game
Unjacketed wadcutter: for target shooting
Jacketed flat point: for practice, target shooting
Unjacketed round nose: for inexpensive practice

and that's only a little about handguns.
I'm not sure if you wanted to use a rifle for this scene

RawB's photo
Tue 03/31/09 08:36 AM
I've lost myself
the best of me
with every moment past
a vanishing recipe
and no care to stop it
no urge to save me from me
why I ask to thee
why me
what have I to give
what right to live
what foresight
worth seeing out of this cold night
this cold blight
eating away at me with one bite
it's too big
my fathers first born
first and only kin
until just then
twenty one years later
when now we both are men
damn him
damn me to oblivion
I curse this life I've been given
been living
with all my heart
that's grief stricken
no more flowers for me
worth picking
smelling of sweet pallon perfume
never again
a hermit maybe
but free from rejection
false affection
the universes neglecting
only seeing my complexion
not my brain
my soul
my auras burning flame
gone out from my tears
that once fell like the rain
my feet have given up the walk
my lips sealed tight from talk
my arms and fingers stuck in one spot
without me I only rot
searching for better days
I think it's only a thought
but I can't do this on my own
I'm not that strong when I'm not whole
what is a king
without his throne
what is a man
when he's all alone
where is my will
who hath taken my speed and skill
my love for life
the fear, pain, joy and thrill
that put me in the highest flight
does no one see this but me with blurred sight
have I become a statistic
a cynical man blinded by his lack of sanity
rapped up in the worlds vanity
his delusions of reality
speaking to deaf ears of blasphemy
if I should fall off this place
would it matter
would you call it a tragedy
if I should shatter
fall apart like cracking paint splatters
over the edge without a rope or latter
in the darkest place with only faint echos of laughter
to taunt me
to haunt me
and only more time passing by between night and day
to float me away
to empty black sand shores
where washed away footsteps can't been seen anymore
I beg you to listen
there was once a time I adored you
a drank you in with morning dew
when you and I were once both new
but somehow
someway
I have forgotten you
as you have forgotten me
forgot what my meaning was
what I was meant to do
I have no clue
are you done with me
are we now through
or will you lift me up once more
and fortify me with your glue
your embracing hug
that makes me new
your strong pure love
your skies of blue
that makes me whole again
I miss you
and that's the only thing that I know to be true

©March2009
:Roberto Loera













RawB's photo
Wed 03/25/09 06:56 AM
I'm so glad that you all dropped in and shared with me, thank you all for your comments blushing smitten you all are too kind

RawB's photo
Sat 03/21/09 10:15 PM
Thank you all very much for your comments =)

RawB's photo
Mon 03/16/09 05:20 PM
Yay! I love'em.

drinker

RawB's photo
Mon 03/16/09 05:16 PM

Excellent! bigsmile
Thank you, I'm glad you liked drinks

RawB's photo
Mon 03/16/09 10:04 AM
Your lips taste of bittersweet
I caress your face
and slide mine against your cheek

Your eyes spark fires
in darkness light the night
our lips will never tire

your salty skin
my hardened body
together wrapped in sin

twice used air
gasping for more
with gentle pulling of your hair

only two left in the world
sculpted together
like sand in the ocean forms a pearl

Hard and soft
around we gravitate
finding ourselves lost

Drinking you
like life force
rejuvenated by the dew

forever us
against the times
secured by trust

no need for cheap lines
lovers wrapped in silk
stimulated by our minds

together in bliss
now come here lover
and lets consecrate this

©2009March By: Roberto Loera





RawB's photo
Thu 03/12/09 05:54 AM
This was not suppose to happen
I curse the devil dragon
taken away
just before yesterday
now what ells can I say
that you will hear
begging please no
into deaf ears
almost all out of tears
robbed of my fears
my emotions
numb to counseling peers
who only understand
that I cant stand
and crawl damning Gods plan
don't let go of my hand
what must I do
unraveling without my glue
without you
sleeping with unrest
the weight of the whole ocean
crashing onto my chest
cant breath
why did you have to leave
dried salt crystals upon my sleeves
horrible days
passing by
though I try
no amount of pulling
can get me back into the sky
dreams have left the clouds
and sparkles from my eyes
you were so proud
now I'm ashamed to speak out loud
your name
the pain shrouds
I blame myself
for every moment I wasted
for every tear you tasted
fragmented pieces
pasted into envelopes
hidden in a musty basement
entrapped in walls of cement
only remembered in my last song
a sorrowful lament

Roberto Loera ©March2009






RawB's photo
Thu 03/12/09 05:18 AM
wow I thought that this had died down, but I came back to see that it had gotten a few more hits bigsmile
Thank you all so much for reading and commenting on it, and even if you just dropped by to see what was going on

RawB's photo
Thu 03/05/09 06:55 AM
thank you for your comments

RawB's photo
Sat 02/28/09 05:47 AM
Stalking you
wanting me
hiding in shadows
waiting
for the opportune moment
then pouncing
yet you embrace it
death breathing down your neck
and you turn to face it
feeling me on your skin
raised flesh
broken bracelet
pulsating chest
quivering breaths
you can taste it
quiet whimpers
worm shivers
never quick
biting lips
breath my air
sweat drips
epic

©2009 Feb. Roberto Loera



RawB's photo
Tue 02/24/09 07:31 PM

very nice
Thank you

RawB's photo
Tue 02/24/09 07:31 PM

Very nicely done!flowerforyou
Thank you