Topic: Lonely Soul
michael1313's photo
Sat 01/13/07 07:22 PM
within my poem I softly write,
within my home of a good night,
pin and pad,in a soft white light,
about a love and a Lonely Knight,

this lonely Knight within my soul,
my lone birthright within my goal,
as I dream,my heart pays toll,
but I dream as a Lonely Soul,

for true love and passions bliss,
make true love and passions kiss,
without this love I truely miss,
longing for my loves true bliss,

angel upon my strong shoulder,
find my mate before I grow older,
fill my soul love growing bolder,
before my soul is growing colder,

some day soon before I die,
allow me this,just one more try,
allow my kiss another high,
passions kiss into the sky,
how I miss those days gone by,
one more kiss,one more try,
another kiss for by and by,
another kiss,before I cry,
just one more of lovers try,
angels please I'm asking why,
if no love found my soul will die,
into the night without a sound,
show lost love what you have found,
this Lonely Soul upon the ground,
for broken heart,no love was found,
now torn in pieces scattered all around.......Lonely Soul

mtironroses's photo
Sat 01/13/07 07:29 PM
(((((((hugs))))))))))))

michael1313's photo
Sat 01/13/07 07:37 PM
thanx for th HUGS!!!

I started this one last year,
but just got back to it tonight...

thought I'd post it for it's questions...

greeneyedlady42's photo
Sat 01/13/07 08:31 PM
Thats really good Michael- Glad you finished it and shared it with us.
Thanks!

michael1313's photo
Sat 01/13/07 08:59 PM
this Lonely Soul of heart and mind,
looking for true love to find,
within my world without strife,
a special girl to be a wife,
hopes to find before too late,
a special love for my mate,
all gone now,forgotten hope,
lonely now,forgot to cope,
please some how,throw me a rope,
Sweet Angels please,help me cope,
show me love,not to tease,
know my love,hot to please,
bring me just one girl for me,
sing for me how true love can be,
how these chains do hold me down,
find my soul upon cold ground
Sweet Angels please sing your song,
Sweet Angels please don't be wrong,
sing a song for just one love,
as heaven sent for from above,
sing for me and set me free,
sing loves song,sing for me,
Sweet Angels please save my soul,
Happieness is my lonely goal,
send a girl to ease my mind,
heart and soul and love to find,
Sweet Angels,sing for me,
send me a love,to set me free,
cold hard steel that now does bind,
so hard to feel for love is blind,
save for me my heart and mind,
send to me,a true heart to find,
angels see my heart unwind,
send to me a love in kind...............Lonely Soul

Morena350's photo
Sat 01/13/07 10:10 PM
yep,,that's a good one

michael1313's photo
Sat 01/13/07 11:32 PM
well this is saterday...so it's 2 for th price of 1...lol...

Gryphyn's photo
Sun 01/14/07 08:35 AM
Not sure they go together, however they are both are very good works.

G

karmafury's photo
Sun 01/14/07 08:51 AM
Both very good Mike. Thanks.

terisa's photo
Sun 01/14/07 05:13 PM
michael...as always u are so damn gooddd.....i hope these are going to
publisher too

michael1313's photo
Sun 01/14/07 05:56 PM
thanx y'alls...just writing out my feeling in poems...

Cybear's photo
Sun 01/14/07 07:00 PM
Both are superb Michael.Two more pages to be placed gently within it's
file to become entwined with it's loving companions awaiting their new
glorious lease upon life.I can't wait to see this book published.Please
keep me on the list to obtain a copy.Keep up the great work Michael,you
know you ROCK!Godspeed!Cybear.

I am totally speechless concerning the tree poem.OMG!All I'm going to
say there,is that the bear had to jump in the lake to cool down after
that read.No box of Hot Tamales needed with that read.(phew)That one was
plenty hot enough,not many further enticements needed there.WOW!

michael1313's photo
Sun 01/14/07 07:20 PM
Lmao!!!
thanx Cybear...th "apple tree",,,
was feeling frisky when I wrote it...lol...

mtironroses's photo
Sun 01/14/07 10:20 PM
(((((((((((hugs again again))))))))))))

and yeah the apple tree...... wheeeeeeeeeew !

michael1313's photo
Sun 01/14/07 11:16 PM
Lmao!!! a lil' too hot maybe???