Topic: What you've lost
goodlil666's photo
Mon 04/07/08 07:28 PM
To watch the sunrise on another day,after your freedom has been taken away.
You start to realize just what you've lost,and start to realize at what cost.
It starts to soak in as you peer through the bars and razor wire,that you no longer can do just what you desire.
Your movements are monitored around the clock,and you're herded around like common livestock.
These hellish confines that keep you locked in,.. in themselves are overflowing with sin.
Even though for your actions this is the fee,you long for the day that you will be set free.
Any chance of reform inside I see none,for your spirit life are drained and done.

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Mon 04/07/08 07:29 PM
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barefootbaby78's photo
Mon 04/07/08 07:29 PM
flowerforyou painfully poeticflowerforyou

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Mon 04/07/08 07:30 PM
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Mon 04/07/08 07:30 PM
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MirrorMirror's photo
Mon 04/07/08 07:30 PM
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me2g's photo
Mon 04/07/08 07:31 PM
so true.. good write man...smokin

ArtGurl's photo
Mon 04/07/08 07:31 PM
Welcome to the poetry section flowerforyou

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Mon 04/07/08 07:37 PM
Good write..so sadflowerforyou flowerforyou

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Mon 04/07/08 07:37 PM
Excellent write.A painful & very sincere inside look @ the dark & dismal life beyond locked bars.I hope 2 hear more.Godspeed!Cy:smile: drinker

goodlil666's photo
Mon 04/07/08 07:42 PM
WOW !! Thankyou ALL very much for your kind words and encourgement.It is truly appreciated.
God Bless You All

LAMom's photo
Mon 04/07/08 07:43 PM
Love & Light

flowerforyou

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Mon 04/07/08 07:49 PM
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Mon 04/07/08 08:26 PM
flowerforyou
Welcome to the poetry section!
Sad write but true...