Topic: The Broken Man
Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 04/10/08 12:36 AM
The Broken Man

I know he's there, not far away
Though his stares are cold
That's just his way.

He really cares
But it never shows
Because he cares
You'll never know.

His life is made
Of just four walls,
A prying doctor
And paging calls.

This livid man
Once full of life,
Lost his way
Through sullen strife.

He once was wed
But death came near
And took his bride
Their fifteenth year.

He tried to live
To do things right
But found the struggle
Not worth the fight.

He rarely speaks,
Though often stares
And often thinks
That no one cares.

He's just a shell
Just made of man,
Not empty space
Like empty can.

He speaks to me
And confides his past,
He weaves his dreams
But they don't last.

When it's time
That I must go,
I see him stare
As if he's alone,

And there he sits
In silence weeps
His uncried tears
Never touch his cheeks,

Many know him
And think he's crazed,
He feels forsaken
And hides his shame.

The pain he bears
Is his alone,
He sits and stares
And thinks of home.

Fadedspirit 4/10/2008

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Thu 04/10/08 12:38 AM
drinker drinker drinker drinker To be GONE,,good read.

Spaceman2008's photo
Thu 04/10/08 12:42 AM

The Broken Man

I know he's there, not far away
Though his stares are cold
That's just his way.

He really cares
But it never shows
Because he cares
You'll never know.

His life is made
Of just four walls,
A prying doctor
And paging calls.

This livid man
Once full of life,
Lost his way
Through sullen strife.

He once was wed
But death came near
And took his bride
Their fifteenth year.

He tried to live
To do things right
But found the struggle
Not worth the fight.

He rarely speaks,
Though often stares
And often thinks
That no one cares.

He's just a shell
Just made of man,
Not empty space
Like empty can.

He speaks to me
And confides his past,
He weaves his dreams
But they don't last.

When it's time
That I must go,
I see him stare
As if he's alone,

And there he sits
In silence weeps
His uncried tears
Never touch his cheeks,

Many know him
And think he's crazed,
He feels forsaken
And hides his shame.

The pain he bears
Is his alone,
He sits and stares
And thinks of home.

Fadedspirit 4/10/2008


Wow...man...that's just....man...that's just powerful, man...

Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 04/10/08 12:43 AM
Edited by Fadedspirit on Thu 04/10/08 12:45 AM
Thanks iam4u!drinker Somedays I think about being gone....lol...but I'd be afraid of getting lost like my friend.


Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 04/10/08 12:46 AM
Thanks Spaceman2008. drinker

kc0003's photo
Thu 04/10/08 12:47 AM
faded......

man that was nice
my freind

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 04/10/08 12:51 AM
I don't know what to say... touchingflowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 04/10/08 12:51 AM
Thanks kc!drinker

kc0003's photo
Thu 04/10/08 01:09 AM
your welcome

drinker

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Thu 04/10/08 01:21 AM
Very touching. But your not alone.

Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 04/10/08 01:26 AM
Awww, thanks lurchs_sister.flowerforyou

Thanks vvenia and welcome to the forum.

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Thu 04/10/08 01:32 AM
Edited by Gypsy41 on Thu 04/10/08 01:32 AM
BEAUTIFUL!!!flowerforyou :cry: flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 04/10/08 01:44 AM
Awww, thanks Gypsy. I'm glad you stopped by.flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Fri 04/11/08 07:54 AM
Good write. I never know how to deal with people like this. I want to respect their privacy, but I also want them to see they ain't done yet and try to find the right point of focus.

It probably would have been more politically correct to say wish them to see they ain't done yet, but dammit I'm selfish and yup, I want 'em to see it, so they can stop the self ickinessssssss -- it sucks.............

LAMom's photo
Fri 04/11/08 07:58 AM
(((( Faded ))))

I shall leave you with these flowerforyou

Touching to say the least my friend

pkh's photo
Fri 04/11/08 10:01 AM
flowerforyou very good write and so touching

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 04/11/08 03:38 PM
(((Fade)))flowerforyou

A write so true of some...
May the broken people be glued back together...