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Topic: This Try
michael1313's photo
Sat 01/20/07 10:41 AM
Yes I would like to give this a try,
if you read my poems,I'm a lonely guy,
not in desperation,but in frustration,
do my lonely dreams fly oh so high,
living for my last sunset,
hoping for a loving bet,
take this chance to find romance,
show me true,your loving chance,
show me YOU,in your loving dance,
don't leave it all up to chance,
take my hand and walk with me,
read my poems and truely see,
to know this man,you want with thee,
if you love me true,our souls set free...

in the west where I was born,
within my test from there I'm torn,
forgotten not of my birthright,
for I am not,forgotten Knight,
sweet sunsets and forgotten nights,
I do remember those beautiful sights,
from high Sierra was my lost trail,
camping, fishing, another ghost tale,
by the fire,to last all night,
within those arms of sweet delite,
return to my home,I just might,
return to my own,my thirst for light,
from the west,I've felt most free,
watch a sunset,with lonely me..........Lonely Soul

LAMom's photo
Sat 01/20/07 10:48 AM
Michael,,, You are amazing, i have so enjoyed this journey into your
soul,,,, Thank you for sharing so willing...

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 01/20/07 10:59 AM
Another good one M very nice.

michael1313's photo
Sat 01/20/07 11:16 AM
thanx,y'all...just reaching out...
baring a little more of my soul each time I write...

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 01/20/07 11:21 AM
Great Mike...
Truly Beautiful

michael1313's photo
Sat 01/20/07 01:55 PM
Thank You SCG...Thank You...

terisa's photo
Sun 01/21/07 08:22 AM
another good one..do u realize this is number 109...that i know
of..lol..all of them so good

michael1313's photo
Sun 01/21/07 09:03 AM
wow...that many?

is that a record?lol

what is th record...does anyone know???

no photo
Sun 01/21/07 09:07 AM
nice written, 1313

michael1313's photo
Sun 01/21/07 09:09 AM
thanx S.D.

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 01/21/07 09:10 AM
M I'm sure you hold the record in here for the most poems hands down!!

michael1313's photo
Sun 01/21/07 09:18 AM
but there are so many other poets here...

like CCP has alot of poems out,what is her count?
and SCG has alot...how many?
and JTWHITE...???
has anyone been counting?

not that it matters...just asking...

michael1313's photo
Sun 01/21/07 09:20 AM
and Gryphyn's poems are up there too...
he's in love,so I expect more from him soon too...

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 01/21/07 09:24 AM
Hummm we talking numbers not who lol count them I'm not gonnna too lol

michael1313's photo
Sun 01/21/07 09:27 AM
maybe Morena knows?

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Sun 01/21/07 02:29 PM
Michael i love this poem and i got to say watching a sunset with you ,i
think would be heaven

michael1313's photo
Sun 01/21/07 02:34 PM
sure...we could walk along th beach too,then go out for dinner over
candlelight and soft music in th background...

or just stay on th beach and build a bonfire...
and listen to the waves as they roll in...

no photo
Thu 01/25/07 08:09 PM
Again just say when:) i would be a fool not to your nice looking:) and a
poet to :) plus you have a great sence of humorsmooched

michael1313's photo
Thu 01/25/07 08:45 PM
blushing awwwww shucks...

Thank You!!!smokin

michael1313's photo
Thu 01/25/07 08:46 PM
WHEN

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