a pain so deep
i cant get any sleep
im tired of being wrong
i have forgotten how to be strong
i have been beaten so far down
now i walk around with this miserable frown
i have these dreams of you and me
but cant see a way for us to be
my hearts been beaten
my hearts been bruised
but when with you it dont feel used
so enough with the bads let get to the glads
your a woman i can trust
you know im not out for lust
you know im not looking for a fling
i refuse to let my heart feel that sting
i want to start a new life
i want you to be my future wife
now you know how i feel
our thoughts could come so real
i hope you know its true
i only have a heart of love for you

wow..very deep man..and i bet from the very depth of your heart

Really Incredible,,

that is the first poem i actually got published and yes it is deep from
the heart cause its true

Congrats to you,,,, Keep posting,,,,

thank you maybe i will think about posting more

kid u have a good poem there...keep dealing from the heart and u come up
with good ones....i oughta know been reading some real good ones most of
day..editing them for a friend

ohhhhhhhhh so sweet and heartfelt!

Sweet words Husky , very sweet...

i have always liked poetry i just never told any of my family because
they dont think straight men should write it no offence to anyone but it
is one of my hidden talents that i want to share with the world i hope
yous all enjoy it

well you just go right ahead and share ! most of us will appreciate !!
and if some one is rude ,,just you pay them no attention cause rude is
the key word there!!

You keep writing Husky and will keep reading,,, you have a great passion
in writing,,,, D :)

i really do appreciate the support thank you all very much

I do hope you share with us again, you have a gift and it should never
be hidden.

Yes Husky you are right, keep writing real men can show thier feelings.

G

Hummmm yeah listen to Gryphyn truth is REAL MEN
do know how to show there love not only in words
but in life also.