Topic: Please tell me if you...
Sitngrin's photo
Tue 04/15/08 09:16 PM
A) Think that I have enough detail in what I'm looking for in a woman

(B) If what I have to offer sounds egotistical or is a necessary part of info.

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for all those who help me out. Thanks


~Den

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Tue 04/15/08 09:17 PM
I can tell you, that you got your 20 page book there lol sorry hon had to say it flowerforyou flowerforyou :tongue: :tongue: :tongue: :heart:

barefootbaby78's photo
Tue 04/15/08 09:18 PM
i think youre pretty demanding...you need a slave not a girlfriend

writer_gurl's photo
Tue 04/15/08 09:19 PM

i think youre pretty demanding...you need a slave not a girlfriend

True...But who wouldn't be his slave?I mean look at him!!:tongue:

Sitngrin's photo
Tue 04/15/08 09:20 PM

I can tell you, that you got your 20 page book there lol sorry hon had to say it flowerforyou flowerforyou :tongue: :tongue: :tongue: :heart:


Smartass :tongue: Love ya girl

Sitngrin's photo
Tue 04/15/08 09:20 PM

i think youre pretty demanding...you need a slave not a girlfriend


Wow. I never saw it as demanding, just as what I am looking for in a woman that would offer clarity, but um...thanks for the input


~Den

Sitngrin's photo
Tue 04/15/08 09:20 PM


i think youre pretty demanding...you need a slave not a girlfriend

True...But who wouldn't be his slave?I mean look at him!!:tongue:



LMAO, tyvm flowerforyou


~Den

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Tue 04/15/08 09:21 PM


I can tell you, that you got your 20 page book there lol sorry hon had to say it flowerforyou flowerforyou :tongue: :tongue: :tongue: :heart:


Smartass :tongue: Love ya girl


you know i try :tongue:

Sitngrin's photo
Tue 04/15/08 09:24 PM



I can tell you, that you got your 20 page book there lol sorry hon had to say it flowerforyou flowerforyou :tongue: :tongue: :tongue: :heart:


Smartass :tongue: Love ya girl


you know i try :tongue:


I'll buy you a bookmark :tongue:

HMontana's photo
Tue 04/15/08 09:25 PM
Well, Sitngrin...plenty of detail. No worries there. I'm just thinking, as a reader, so much of what you ask/demand/want SHOULD be a given (loyalty, honesty, intimacy, etc.). Maybe it screams too much of past hurt or your own hangups?

Which, might be okay...it's kinda nice to get all that out in the open.

Some of it, tho, makes me think, "sitnspin" (a play on your own words).bigsmile

You sound cool enough...just let people get to know you a bit. I'm no expert, just my opinion.

Sitngrin's photo
Tue 04/15/08 09:28 PM

Well, Sitngrin...plenty of detail. No worries there. I'm just thinking, as a reader, so much of what you ask/demand/want SHOULD be a given (loyalty, honesty, intimacy, etc.). Maybe it screams too much of past hurt or your own hangups?

Which, might be okay...it's kinda nice to get all that out in the open.

Some of it, tho, makes me think, "sitnspin" (a play on your own words).bigsmile

You sound cool enough...just let people get to know you a bit. I'm no expert, just my opinion.


An appreciated opinion, thank you flowerforyou


~Den

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Tue 04/15/08 09:31 PM
A,,,,Den, if I may my friend...
this is a bit tuff to say but ,,wow,,,dude,,,I will rarely ever read a dudes profile, unless I think THEIR FAKE or just NUTS and TRYING to make sense of them.
But yours is very HARD CORE as to how MOST ladies will read "YOU"..
They will feel your demanding, self centered, egotistical,
No ROOM for ERROR on their part,,,thats what I would feel if YOUR WORDS were on a chicks profile here..
And then,I think? number 20, was way out of sink with what you had already kind-of demandly asked for?

IM NOT TRYING to cause you ANY problems or insults,,just BEING very REAL as to WHAT LADIES "MIGHT" READ into who or what you are...
It might just be me,,but I am just trully trying to help you with your profile...
And if I hurt your feelings here, I am trully sorry man,,I just have to GIVE you MY TRUTH..I still find you a very likible friend, and enjoy your poems very much...drinker :heart:

Sitngrin's photo
Tue 04/15/08 09:34 PM

A,,,,Den, if I may my friend...
this is a bit tuff to say but ,,wow,,,dude,,,I will rarely ever read a dudes profile, unless I think THEIR FAKE or just NUTS and TRYING to make sense of them.
But yours is very HARD CORE as to how MOST ladies will read "YOU"..
They will feel your demanding, self centered, egotistical,
No ROOM for ERROR on their part,,,thats what I would feel if YOUR WORDS were on a chicks profile here..
And then,I think? number 20, was way out of sink with what you had already kind-of demandly asked for?

IM NOT TRYING to cause you ANY problems or insults,,just BEING very REAL as to WHAT LADIES "MIGHT" READ into who or what you are...
It might just be me,,but I am just trully trying to help you with your profile...
And if I hurt your feelings here, I am trully sorry man,,I just have to GIVE you MY TRUTH..I still find you a very likible friend, and enjoy your poems very much...drinker :heart:



No offense whatsoever taken, that's why I asked other's opinions so I can tweak it correctly. Thanks for the input bud

drinker drinker

~Den

LAMom's photo
Tue 04/15/08 09:36 PM
Awwwwwwwwww Hell Sweetie, I perv your profile just cause I can,, Your a Doll and ya know I love ya,,,

flowerforyou :wink: :heart:

HMontana's photo
Tue 04/15/08 09:38 PM
So, just curious...and you don't have to answer...are you gonna change anything?flowerforyou

Sitngrin's photo
Tue 04/15/08 09:38 PM

Awwwwwwwwww Hell Sweetie, I perv your profile just cause I can,, Your a Doll and ya know I love ya,,,

flowerforyou :wink: :heart:


And you know I love ya too! :heart: :heart:


~Den

Sitngrin's photo
Tue 04/15/08 09:39 PM

So, just curious...and you don't have to answer...are you gonna change anything?flowerforyou


Yes, I learned at the tender age of about 3 to take advice when given, and to at least mull it over in my mind, so yes, I will probably take a second look at it thanks to everyone's feedback



flowerforyou
~Den

Bry395's photo
Wed 04/16/08 06:56 AM
Your profile is fine, maybe just add a few more pics like a close up with a smile. The second & third pics are a bit dark.

pkh's photo
Fri 04/18/08 07:57 PM
awww Den you are a sweet man whoever captures your heart will be a lucky woman...hugs my friendflowerforyou