Topic: Beneath your wings
nightruler's photo
Thu 04/17/08 03:49 PM

Beneath your wings,
once a place of security
Slowly unfolds
taking the life out of me
Uncertain yet desperate
love was the air I'd breathe
slowly fading into
a time i can't retrieve

for who else would I die for
a sacrifice beyond words
if my eyes can't testify this love
then how am I of any worth


My lost for words,
becomes the death of me
Constantly searching
to offer more than broken dreams
to ascend into the skies
where you become the night
and I will make this fantasy
surround our lives


for who else would I bleed for
but if broken wings are all we have
then the stillness is all i have a need for
to remain forever without the fall
Im holding on to love with all my strength
to live and breathe your life again someday


MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 04/17/08 03:57 PM
flowerforyou drinker Good write!

2Btrue2One's photo
Thu 04/17/08 03:58 PM
JT, very nicely written, broken wings heal my friend, hope you are ok..drinker

Differentkindofwench's photo
Thu 04/17/08 03:59 PM
I agree with Ms T-Bear........

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 04/17/08 04:32 PM
Nice write JT... You ok my friend?flowerforyou flowerforyou

nightruler's photo
Thu 04/17/08 04:47 PM
I'm good,thanks guysdrinker

2Btrue2One's photo
Thu 04/17/08 04:48 PM

I'm good,thanks guysdrinker


Very glad to hear that JT.. let me know if there is anything I can do..drinker

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 04/17/08 04:50 PM
WHEW! You pour heart out like this and it scares me sometimes!

Here for you ya know!flowerforyou