Topic: My Labrinth
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Wed 01/24/07 11:24 AM
Walking through shadows
Watch as they shatter
And tear at the seams
So lost in this labrinth
It feels like a dream
Grey mist it swirls
And grabs at my feet
Louder and louder
I hear my heartbeat
Voices are calling to me
Screaming in pain
Hard as i try
I'm running in vain
I stumble an fall
Get back to my feet
Somehow it all
Seems to repeat
Drowing all sound
All that i hear
No longer my heartbeat
But only their fear
Closer and closer
They finally appear
My god is it so
Is it me that i see
All the pain, despair and fear
That i've felt
All the things of which
I've never delt

kojack's photo
Wed 01/24/07 11:31 AM
Wow very deep, Great job hun:heart:

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Wed 01/24/07 12:43 PM
Whoa powerful words there Jen....keep writin the fear and demons
out..soon they'll disappear

DANE1973's photo
Wed 01/24/07 12:49 PM
Good job sugarJen, keep it up. CCP, that doesn't work for me.*WEG*

karmafury's photo
Wed 01/24/07 12:50 PM
Wow! Very, very good.