Topic: my sweet valentine
roughrouge's photo
Fri 01/26/07 02:58 PM
....My Sweet Valentine...

I look up at the starry night,
Shinning down on me all bright
The night wind in the sky sings out
Kiss her gently under the moon lite nite

I heard coming in the distance
Her laughter came to me in an instant
It rises up and shower me
Take anything but that from me

I have walked and walked until I found thee
Heaven's splendor for all to see
A love so free like the river Nile
Flowing gently for miles and miles

I inhaled her beauty like fresh red roses
Each petal a boquet of fragnance growing
Bursting through the autumn night
Showering sweetness across the sky.

I cherish you, sweet valentine
I glory in knowing you'll always be mine
I drink of your love to fill my cravings
The splendor of which is so amazing.

There's so much to you my sweet flower
Hidden inside like a silent tower
Now it escapes like rays of sunshine
Showering across the glorious sky.

Mark Hill

michael1313's photo
Fri 01/26/07 03:04 PM
good work Mark...this one might find your Valentinesmokin

roughrouge's photo
Fri 01/26/07 03:09 PM
thanks michael...hey the day is almost upon us :)

LAMom's photo
Fri 01/26/07 03:10 PM
Really nice Mark,,,

Cybear's photo
Fri 01/26/07 03:17 PM
Wow!That is beautiful.This Valentine poem would warm any woman's heart.I
would ask you Mark if I could borrow these words to send to my
Princess,sadly however I restlessly search for her.If and when I find my
true love then I may ask you if I may lend them just for one day.Very
captivating words indeed.Simply awesome and compelling words spoken.I
reach to the Heaven's and ask God to guide us to her,and her to
us.Godspeed!Cybear.:smile:

dizzydean5's photo
Fri 01/26/07 03:19 PM
hay mark that was great can i copy it and send it to a freind please
dean

roughrouge's photo
Fri 01/26/07 03:21 PM
thanks guys...

i always think of valentine
with love beaming from mine eyes
will this be the time for me
to find the god made for me

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 01/26/07 03:22 PM
Awesome words to a love one there are no sweety words to hear.

roughrouge's photo
Fri 01/26/07 03:22 PM
sure Dean i'll be honored

roughrouge's photo
Fri 01/26/07 03:24 PM
Cybear that was really cool and poetic and sure feel free to use
it...txgal ty you're great

dizzydean5's photo
Fri 01/26/07 03:25 PM
thanks dean

no photo
Fri 01/26/07 03:34 PM
WOW I love it very good:) It's speaks to me:)

dizzydean5's photo
Fri 01/26/07 03:38 PM
i made a copy for you baby

no photo
Fri 01/26/07 03:43 PM
Thanks sugar :)

roughrouge's photo
Fri 01/26/07 04:18 PM
you're welcome sexylady...my pleasure

SouthernDoll29's photo
Fri 01/26/07 04:50 PM
Mark thanks for sending that to me on my mail,thats so beautiful,I sent
you a reply back Later Rose

roughrouge's photo
Fri 01/26/07 04:58 PM
ty rose i know you enjoy reading them :) ty for the reply

SouthernDoll29's photo
Fri 01/26/07 05:10 PM
Hey Mark its me again,Did you get my mail to you? Later Rose