Topic: A ROSE
brutis's photo
Sat 01/27/07 04:52 AM
A DROP OR TWO FEEL FROM THE SKY
LANDED BESIDE ME AND CAUGHT MY EYE
SANK IN THE GROUND WITH ALL IT'S GRACE
NOT TO BE FOUND , NOT EVEN A TRACE
SOON A ROSE GREW UP FROM THE GROUND
A THING OF BEAUTY I HAVE FOUND
NURTURED IT WELL SO IT WOULD GROW
NOT TO FAST , YET NOT TO SLOW
WHEN IT GREW UP I BROUGHT IT INSIDE
TO CHERISH FOREVER AND NOT TO HIDE
SO PROUD OF MY ROSE IT REMINDS ME OF YOU
KEEP IT FOREVER AND SOON THERE,LL BE TWO
IT WILL BE LIKE OUR LOVE IN EVERY WAY
LAST FOREVER ,IT WILL ALWAYS STAY
MY LITTLE ROSE IS JUST LIKE YOU
KEEPS ME SMILING WHEN I AM BLUE
THIS ROSE IS LIKE MY LOVE FOR YOU
STARTED AS ONE , AND THERE WAS TWO
MY LOVE FOR YOU IS LIKE THIS ROSE
LAST FOREVER AND GROWS AND GROWS

catchme_ifucan's photo
Sat 01/27/07 05:03 AM
:smile: nice work!

brutis's photo
Sat 01/27/07 05:05 AM
thank you i try

michael1313's photo
Sat 01/27/07 05:19 AM
not bad New Bee...

nice poem Brutis...

BUT NEXT TIME COULD YOU SAY IT A LIL' LOUDER???

lol,just picking on ya dude...
just that it looks like you're yellin' at mesmokin

brutis's photo
Sat 01/27/07 05:28 AM
I copied and paste fro my documents that's why , sorry but I will fix
the problem

michael1313's photo
Sat 01/27/07 05:32 AM
hey don't worry about it...by th way...
did you read mine about a rose?

"Passion Flower"...dusted it off for you...laugh

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 01/27/07 06:13 AM
good one!

brutis's photo
Sat 01/27/07 06:59 AM
Yes I did awsome man we could start a rose book

no photo
Sat 01/27/07 07:30 AM
Hello just got up from bed .How's everone doing?

roughrouge's photo
Sat 01/27/07 07:38 AM
that's good...first i've read from you nice work

LAMom's photo
Sat 01/27/07 08:08 AM
Nice Work,,, Thanks

SouthernDoll29's photo
Sat 01/27/07 08:11 AM
Hey brutis that was great,you know my name is Rose so I gotta love
it,Good Work!!

brutis's photo
Sat 01/27/07 09:10 AM
I have to thank you all . It is response like that that keeps me writing
cause I never thought I had it in me Thank you evey one

venusrose's photo
Sat 01/27/07 05:46 PM
Well done...very, very nice! Thanks for sharing.

michael1313's photo
Sat 01/27/07 05:49 PM
Brutis...
poetry is in us all...

keep writing,please!smokin

brutis's photo
Thu 02/08/07 07:53 AM
thanks micheal but I need a brake the people I wrote this abuot have
past on after 62 years together

metarzan's photo
Tue 05/01/07 10:47 AM
hey man i read your peom and it touched my heart so why have you not
posted any more peoms

creationsfire's photo
Tue 05/01/07 08:06 PM
Sweet poem. Nice that it was dusted off and brought back to the top.
Great read. And touching.flowerforyou