Topic: pop song I'm working on
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Sun 05/11/08 01:52 AM
Edited by bizybawdy on Sun 05/11/08 01:52 AM
well I suppose the I don’t knows
could get to you would get to you
but I don’t know and I know it shows
it shows right through it shines right through
and then there’s you steppin on my toes
but it’s hard to choose i've tried to choose

it's something about ocd and indecision and relationship

input would be appreciated

JaceKnows's photo
Sun 05/11/08 02:22 AM
Mmm bop bip ba dop ba do wop
doobie dab ba do wop bip a dop da doo

Pure pop genius!

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Sun 05/11/08 02:26 AM
laugh pop genius

thanks its a fun sounding song in my head

Adeph's photo
Sun 05/11/08 02:38 AM
add something about unicorns with tears of blood and will be pure emo gold

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Sun 05/11/08 02:42 AM
emos been dead for 10 years let it go already

tearsofblood666's photo
Sun 05/11/08 02:48 AM
Edited by tearsofblood666 on Sun 05/11/08 02:49 AM
and everytime i choose
i fall and fail
walking alone through this blazing hell
and my burning heart
lost in the dark


etc etc
you get the idea

goodluckdrinker

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Sun 05/11/08 02:52 AM

and everytime i choose
i fall and fail
walking alone through this blazing hell
and my burning heart
lost in the dark


etc etc
you get the idea

goodluckdrinker

thanks bro
sounds like a chorus

tearsofblood666's photo
Sun 05/11/08 02:55 AM
yep
could be

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Sun 05/11/08 03:39 PM
well I suppooose the I don’t knooows
could get to you would get to yooou
but I don’t know and I know it shooows
it shows right through it shines right throuuugh
and there you gooo stepping on my toes
but it’s hard to chooose I’ve tried to chooose

it’s all just a state of mind but it’s mine
and it’s one of a kind

a good woman is hard to find and that’s fine
when she’s one of a kind

and repeat

i'll call it counting toes