Topic: Grains Of Sand
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Sun 02/25/07 02:24 PM
Waves crashing upon the shore
Carrying away the sand just a little more
And I sit at the edge
Where the ocean kisses the sand
Teasing it and taunting it
As it pulls away yet just a few more grains
And I wonder will it wash away my pains
As it has the grains of sand
Moving a bit closer
And the waves wash upon me
Pulling away my own grains of pain
Cleaning my soul
Repairing the hole
Filling it with something new
I rise and stand
Walking slowly across the sand
Looking over my shoulder
Seeing the sea carry away a blackened slick
No longer is my soul sick

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Sun 02/25/07 02:36 PM
Ms Poet,
Your heart and Soul are Beautiful
Incredible words,,, Beautifulflowerforyou

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Sun 02/25/07 02:45 PM
wow!!

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Sun 02/25/07 02:48 PM
Damn g/f your on a roll and a goood roll it is love this one!
Its a keeper for sure!

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Sun 02/25/07 03:36 PM
:smile: :smile: :smile: :smile: :smile: :smile: :smile: :smile: awesome
gurly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Sun 02/25/07 03:48 PM
Your inner strength and power is so beautiful.
Incredible poem!flowerforyou

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Sun 02/25/07 03:59 PM
:heart: Inhale,,,,LOVE,,,,exhale, yuk,,,,inhale LOVE,
exhale, YUK....Great feeling here Miss Poet!!!1:heart: flowerforyou
:wink: ((((HUGS)))) TO YA GIRL!smokin