Topic: Time After Time
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Sat 03/03/07 06:48 PM
My life as yours, time after time.
We grow, we love, always keeping with the flow,
Leave school, find work, and think that lifes cool.
Through date after date, trying to find your lifes mate.
My life as yours, time after time.
We grow, we love, always keeping with the flow.
We find the one we wish to marry, feeling life a little scary,
We buy our house, and have a child, life is now so compiled.
Working long to pay the rent, for this life, already half-spent
My life as yours, time after time.
We grow, we love, always keeping with the flow.
Our child now gradurating college, full of dreams and knowledge.
For their start, they must depart, and we both, just fall apart.
This endless game, of fortune and fame, is to me, so damm lame.
My life as yours, time after time.
We grow, we love, always keeping with the flow.
All my life spent working away, living and waiting for that day,
when I could give my child all the time that they needed.
To give all my love and compassion, for them to feel, completed.
My life as yours, time after time.
We grow, we love, always keeping with the flow.:heart:

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Sat 03/03/07 07:23 PM
Very true very good Hats off to you

LAMom's photo
Sat 03/03/07 07:58 PM
Babe,,, So Beautiful!!!!!!
:heart: :heart:

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 03/04/07 04:10 AM

Awesome poem there T bigsmile bigsmile

Need to write more like this one bigsmile bigsmile

ToyotaGirl's photo
Sun 03/04/07 07:58 AM
This is good T.flowerforyou
Would like to read more like this one.bigsmile

Gryphyn's photo
Sun 03/04/07 08:33 AM
This is only a dream flowerforyou Soon to become reality. Thank you
for showing me what to expect.drinker bigsmile bigsmile

Hotchikita's photo
Sun 03/04/07 08:36 AM
Nice poeme iam4u. flowerforyou flowerforyou

creationsfire's photo
Sun 03/04/07 08:38 AM
Lovely and realistic. Ive been there. Great read iam.......Smiles

Cybear's photo
Sun 03/04/07 09:42 AM
Wow!This is fantastic Iam.A completely diff.angle of writing.Superb
message and a extremely fine example of the bond and unconditional love
shared between soul mates.Sometimes their seeds are planted as they grow
together yielding new life forming a branch upon their tree.A gift from
God bearing the same heartbeat and likeness of these two soul mates.A
beautiful continuation of life and happiness despite any relentless
waves of hurt or pain that life so freely doles out.But through all your
tree stands and does not whither.This is the greatest and most treasured
love that we can blessed with on God's green earth.I luv
this!Godspeed!Cybear.glasses :tongue: flowerforyou

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Sun 03/04/07 09:15 PM
:heart: In this place we call life.
Time is NEVER STOPING, or SLOWING, We just drift together!
Until WE die and turn to dust, But TIME will STILL be counting and not
slowing! Thanks for all your nice comments on my words here, and IM
GLAD "YOU" TOOK THE "TIME",,lol!!!:heart:

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Mon 07/27/09 07:29 PM
Time keeps slipping forwards...

MzEm's photo
Mon 07/27/09 07:32 PM
Diggin' this..Nice.

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Tue 07/28/09 08:03 AM

Diggin' this..Nice.
Thank you..

Gossipmpm's photo
Tue 07/28/09 01:20 PM
:heart:

To you!!!