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Topic: She came to me.
rodfcutler Joined Sun 10/21/07 Posts: 1645	Thu 07/17/08 08:52 PM
She came to me in a vision from a dream, someone I had met years ago it seems. She looked at me with her loving,and tender eyes, turned my heart from stone and to an unexpected surprise. Once again my heart ran pure like maple from the jar, and awoke all my sense to what they now are. Tears flowed down my face as I tried to choke them back, but my emotions ran wild and this was a fact. She came to me a beauty one I met so long ago, shifted all her devotion and I became her future beau.

1956deluxe Joined Thu 12/06/07 Posts: 8559	Thu 07/17/08 08:52 PM


LoveBone Joined Mon 07/14/08 Posts: 333	Thu 07/17/08 08:53 PM
beautiful

rodfcutler Joined Sun 10/21/07 Posts: 1645	Thu 07/17/08 08:56 PM
beautiful Thankyou for your compliment!

rodfcutler Joined Sun 10/21/07 Posts: 1645	Thu 07/17/08 08:56 PM
Thankyou Sir! Have a great wknd!

BLUEYEDEVIL Joined Sun 02/24/08 Posts: 297	Thu 07/17/08 09:04 PM
nice

rodfcutler Joined Sun 10/21/07 Posts: 1645	Thu 07/17/08 09:06 PM
nice Thankyou Sir!

blonderockermom Joined Wed 08/08/07 Posts: 6886	Thu 07/17/08 09:18 PM
Very nice indeed

rodfcutler Joined Sun 10/21/07 Posts: 1645	Fri 07/18/08 09:15 AM
Very nice indeed Thankyou for your compliment! Sorry Im late in Thanking you! Have a good one!

sororitygurl4life Joined Wed 04/25/07 Posts: 2185	Fri 07/18/08 09:16 AM
aww very nice ( does snaps with fingers*

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 07/18/08 09:23 AM
Nice Rod....

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Fri 07/18/08 09:29 AM
Good write Rod...

Sweet_and_Sassy Joined Fri 07/06/07 Posts: 217	Fri 07/18/08 10:03 AM
She came to me in a vision from a dream, someone I had met years ago it seems. She looked at me with her loving,and tender eyes, turned my heart from stone and to an unexpected surprise. Once again my heart ran pure like maple from the jar, and awoke all my sense to what they now are. Tears flowed down my face as I tried to choke them back, but my emotions ran wild and this was a fact. She came to me a beauty one I met so long ago, shifted all her devotion and I became her future beau. That is beautiful

rodfcutler Joined Sun 10/21/07 Posts: 1645	Fri 07/18/08 06:29 PM
She came to me in a vision from a dream, someone I had met years ago it seems. She looked at me with her loving,and tender eyes, turned my heart from stone and to an unexpected surprise. Once again my heart ran pure like maple from the jar, and awoke all my sense to what they now are. Tears flowed down my face as I tried to choke them back, but my emotions ran wild and this was a fact. She came to me a beauty one I met so long ago, shifted all her devotion and I became her future beau. That is beautiful Thankyou!

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