Topic: Empty hands
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Wed 07/30/08 06:51 PM
Move me with tendencys of care,
Illuminate me to a mutual understanding,
My hands remain empty from holding shallow, empty souls..
They begin to numb after time,they wont hold anything close again,
Yet hope arises slowly as a faint heartbeat stirs them back,
Can they hope to hold or take what is offered?,
The open palm is the geture of trying once more..

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Wed 07/30/08 06:56 PM
Nice word play on the s-n.:smile: drinker

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Wed 07/30/08 06:57 PM
Love it, thank youbigsmile flowerforyou