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Topic: The End
luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Thu 07/31/08 06:46 PM
A battlefield of words nothing said, nothing done Anarchy, at its finest Total devastation, slaughter. Darkness falls... ...Ahhhhhhhhhh... ...Forever. "Oh yessss... ...it feels so good... so warm". "Take me! Feel me! Rape me!". So delicious, I lick my fingers. I want every drop. Vengence, For useless life. "There is no justice in poetry!". "There is no poetry in death!" Fools! "You must fight, fight, fight!" For what? Who knows... ...who cares. "Die fighting!" Yeah, right. Sell that to someone whos buying your line of **... ...IM BROKE! Darkness is... ..oh yes.. ...so sweet... so alluring. JUSTICE! ** POETRY! Save it for the fools. Save it for the living. by~Roberta Murdock~

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Thu 07/31/08 06:48 PM
cool

dealer4519 Joined Wed 08/29/07 Posts: 61	Thu 07/31/08 06:48 PM
Somehow, this reminds me of The Dark Night! Maybe because both were "horrible"!

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Thu 07/31/08 06:49 PM
Somehow, this reminds me of The Dark Night! Maybe because both were "horrible"! Thank you.

RJR1 Joined Fri 02/22/08 Posts: 548	Thu 07/31/08 06:50 PM
Very real! How goes the fight?

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Thu 07/31/08 07:01 PM
Very real! How goes the fight? Im winning of course!!!!!

RJR1 Joined Fri 02/22/08 Posts: 548	Thu 07/31/08 07:04 PM


luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Thu 07/31/08 07:41 PM
Very real! How goes the fight? Im winning of course!!!!! These are older writings of mine, babe.

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Thu 07/31/08 08:04 PM
when we gonna hear the music to these girl? Nice write

johnboy072472 Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 4874	Thu 07/31/08 08:09 PM
A battlefield of words nothing said, nothing done Anarchy, at its finest Total devastation, slaughter. Darkness falls... ...Ahhhhhhhhhh... ...Forever. "Oh yessss... ...it feels so good... so warm". "Take me! Feel me! Rape me!". So delicious, I lick my fingers. I want every drop. Vengence, For useless life. "There is no justice in poetry!". "There is no poetry in death!" Fools! "You must fight, fight, fight!" For what? Who knows... ...who cares. "Die fighting!" Yeah, right. Sell that to someone whos buying your line of **... ...IM BROKE! Darkness is... ..oh yes.. ...so sweet... so alluring. JUSTICE! ** POETRY! Save it for the fools. Save it for the living. by~Roberta Murdock~ Roberta - my queen.....

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Thu 07/31/08 08:43 PM
when we gonna hear the music to these girl? Nice write They are not songs, they are poems.

johnboy072472 Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 4874	Thu 07/31/08 08:45 PM
when we gonna hear the music to these girl? Nice write They are not songs, they are poems. ITS BEEN A WHILE...... BUT I COULD PROBABLY PUT MUSIC TO IT.......(SIX STRING)

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Thu 07/31/08 08:47 PM
when we gonna hear the music to these girl? Nice write They are not songs, they are poems. ITS BEEN A WHILE...... BUT I COULD PROBABLY PUT MUSIC TO IT.......(SIX STRING) Yes, my king, we do make beautiful music together, dont we?

crazysillygirl Joined Mon 01/29/07 Posts: 4869	Thu 07/31/08 08:49 PM
yeah yall were made for each other!!!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 07/31/08 09:13 PM
Day by Day we learn to live again,, see life in a different view,,,, Blessings to you

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Fri 08/01/08 03:08 PM
when we gonna hear the music to these girl? Nice write They are not songs, they are poems. Oh never mind

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Sat 08/02/08 01:36 PM
when we gonna hear the music to these girl? Nice write They are not songs, they are poems. Oh never mind But Johnboy says he can rock it!!! GO BABY, GO!!!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76367	Sat 08/02/08 01:39 PM
Humm seems you already found that the Mods did not delete this one either Ohh well we all make mistakes in The End!! Have a great day!!

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Sun 08/03/08 01:47 AM
Humm seems you already found that the Mods did not delete this one either Ohh well we all make mistakes in The End!! Have a great day!! I knew it wasnt deleted, but it was censored.