Topic: Hope
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Thu 03/15/07 08:37 PM
Hope for the moment and hope for the day
Nothing left to give you
Nothing left to say
Hands raised to heaven
Where is my God
Eyes and heart are blood shot
Casting down my rod
Knees are bent and dirty
Been prayin all along
Throat is dry and raspy
From singin this same song
Backs in pain from carryin
Hard and heavy loads
Wishin you would help me
Can't do it all alone
Phone is always silent
I alone here make the calls
Can hear the rain a fallin'
Cavin' in four walls
All my footsteps solo
Mornin' noon and night
If i didn't know better
I'd think I've died of fright
Love and loss are all I know
No happiness easy found
When I do find solace
She always turns around
Poised on one foot ready
To make her exit quick
Leaving me feeling
Sad and cold and sick
Wish that it were different
This the truth of all
Wish that I could change it
Erect me four new walls
Alas solo I cannot do this
My hopes are far between
Little warmth have I felt
Few beauties have I seen
What I have seen burnt my eyes
Like the coming on of dawn
Filtered with no glasses
Blindness they have spawned
Reaching out for more
I am feeling you at last
Soon to be no present
Soon to be no past
Embracing what I hope to be
Images of peace
Wrapped within a sweet soft love
Always leaving ME>>>> WILLIAM H. CALDWELL III

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 03/15/07 08:44 PM
That is really Awesome.bigsmile

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Thu 03/15/07 08:46 PM
Thanks K.... WILL flowerforyou

rarerose's photo
Thu 03/15/07 08:50 PM
sad man that made me cry...you know i love your stuff Will

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 03/15/07 08:53 PM
Serious Will this is one of your best very heartfeltbigsmile

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Thu 03/15/07 08:53 PM
Will, You have a magical way with words...
Beautiful, painful, hopeful...flowerforyou flowerforyou
flowerforyou

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Thu 03/15/07 08:56 PM
Will, my brother, best I have ever read of yours to date...it slammed me
hit hard...powerful and awesome!!

venusrose's photo
Thu 03/15/07 09:04 PM
((((Will)))) Well said, sad with a ray of hope. My favorite one of
yours too.flowerforyou

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Thu 03/15/07 09:04 PM
Thank alot this one came easy.. It is exactly how I feel these
days..WILL
Ps Goodnightall

Timber's photo
Thu 03/15/07 09:07 PM
Thank you, this is good writing.

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Sun 03/18/07 03:41 PM
Thanks again..Phone is still silent....WILL

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Sun 03/18/07 05:19 PM
will, nice to see you writing !!!
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Sun 03/18/07 05:24 PM
:cry: :cry: :cry: beautiful:cry: :cry:

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Sun 03/18/07 05:43 PM
Thanks again all.. WILL

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Mon 03/19/07 10:32 AM
Awesome Will,,

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Wed 03/21/07 06:35 AM
Thanks everyone once again .. I truly appreciate the comments.. this is
a song now as well.. Anyone wishing to hear it just ask and i will play
it for you live..WILL

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Mon 03/26/07 07:54 PM
Wanted everyone to check this out again.. I am having writers
block..ALWAYS..WILL

LAMom's photo
Mon 03/26/07 07:58 PM
(((Will)))
Listen to your Soul and the words will flow,,
Your an Incredible Writer,,,flowerforyou

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Mon 03/26/07 08:03 PM


Wow!! Very heartfelt will....Nice work....

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Tue 03/27/07 04:59 AM
Thank you