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Topic: Retort
ArtisticallySpeaking Joined Thu 07/31/08 Posts: 87	Tue 08/12/08 01:38 PM
There are routes of real and flights of fancy. There are dreams that go unsecured. Pouring out my heart has been most chancy. The loan of it was uninsured. I am not a woman who lightly treads. I know now, that I run full tilt. The rough wind tears my garments down to threads. And stardust falls through as fine silt. And though I stand now, without protection. I have learned well, to fix my gaze. I understand the barbs of rejection. I wander far into the maze.

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 08/12/08 01:53 PM


mteagle31 Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Tue 08/12/08 01:58 PM
And though I stand now, without protection. If the Lord stands beside you, you have all the prtection you need!!

ArtisticallySpeaking Joined Thu 07/31/08 Posts: 87	Tue 08/12/08 02:03 PM
And though I stand now, without protection. If the Lord stands beside you, you have all the prtection you need!! I do understand that promise and rely on that as an inner strength. I am working this one up as a song. Thanks all, for commenting.

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 08/12/08 02:34 PM
Good. I look forward to more.

ArtisticallySpeaking Joined Thu 07/31/08 Posts: 87	Tue 08/12/08 02:52 PM
You are very kind. I appreciate the encouragement. Thank you.

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Wed 08/13/08 06:00 PM
loved it, nice

ArtisticallySpeaking Joined Thu 07/31/08 Posts: 87	Wed 08/13/08 06:02 PM
Thank you, Different and Jimz. Very nice of you both.

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Wed 08/13/08 06:03 PM
"i like that"

ArtisticallySpeaking Joined Thu 07/31/08 Posts: 87	Wed 08/13/08 06:07 PM
Thank you very much. There's a story behind it. and I'm thinking about making it into a song.

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