Topic: Chances
Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 09/06/08 03:26 AM
Chances (Like Sand)

I saw the eyes of an angel
And read from her heart,
Touched her dear soul
At an old coffee shop.

She was beautiful to me.

Dark matted hair
And hazel gray eyes,
A thin bow of smile
As we talked about life.

She was more...
Than she seemed to be.

It seems she once had a life
Full of flowers and dreams,
She fell from her grace
When she entered her teens
And then she paused a while...

She lost her smile.

She said chances come round
Sometimes only once,
You better grab them while you can...
And if you don't.
They'll fall through your life.

Like sand.

I felt her tears fall
As they washed down her face,
She apologized softly
And then turned away...

My heart broke in two,
What was I to do?

I tried to give comfort
The best that I could
I held her head softly
I didn't know if I should...

I told her she was beautiful to me.

When it came time to part
She smiled out a thanks,
Embraced me and laughed
And went on her way.

I was intrigued.
To say the least.

She said chances come round
Sometimes only once,
You better grab them while you can...
And if you don't.
They'll fall through your life.

Like sand.

I once had a chance
To love an angel in life,
To love her forever
And make her my wife.

I had other things to do...

I once had the chance
To change what I am,
To better myself
And make better friends.

I had better things to do...

Then I remembered...
The day my heart broke in two.

Chances come round
Sometimes only once,
You better grab them while you can...
And if you don't.
They'll fall through your life.

Like sand...

Fadedspirit 9/5/2008

DTHRomeo's photo
Sat 09/06/08 03:54 AM
drinker

Mrtap's photo
Sat 09/06/08 04:00 AM
Edited by Mrtap on Sat 09/06/08 04:02 AM
awesome dude you dont mind if i copy it do you

it in to my profile.drinker drinker drinker drinker drinker drinker

bastet126's photo
Sat 09/06/08 04:14 AM
the forks in the road... beautiful write, thanks for sharing that! flowerforyou

flame1cutie's photo
Sat 09/06/08 04:47 AM
Very nice write,flowerforyou flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sat 09/06/08 08:02 AM
Got music 4 this? It definitely sings.

LAMom's photo
Sat 09/06/08 08:32 AM
flowers

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Sat 09/06/08 08:34 AM
WOW...Very nice! Love this faded.

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 09/07/08 02:28 PM
Thanks DTHRomeo. Haven't seen ya around too much lately. Hope all is well. drinker

Thanks Mrtap, glad ya liked it. I don't mind if ya copy it. drinker

Thanks bastet126, I'm glad you liked it. flowerforyou

Aww, thanks flame1cutie. :smile: flowerforyou

Thanks for reading DKW. :smile: I have a friend that's using it as one of his songs. Hope it floats....lol. flowerforyou

Awww, thanks LAMom. :smile: flowerforyou

Thanks mteagle. Glad ya liked it. drinker