Topic: She came to me
rodfcutler's photo
Sat 09/13/08 11:07 AM
Edited by rodfcutler on Sat 09/13/08 11:13 AM
She came to me
with her relentless stare,
wasnt really sure
if she wanted me there.

Had that frown
with her upsidedown smile,
that could freeze anyone
as she passed down the miles.

She came to my side
as she glared in my face,
sent shivers through me
all over the place.

I turned to leave
she grabbed my shoulder,
I must give you this
before you get older.

She handed me a note
with her lipstick on the crease,
and she handed me another
I guess was the main piece.

As I read it slowly
my face turned to tears,
as I realized her secret
and her deeprooted fears.

She was going to die
and it could be very soon,
she silently strolled out
of my once bright lit room.

I knew I had
to gather all my wits,
before I lost my senses
and cry quite a bit.

I remember that day
the last time with her,
that was many years ago
when that tragedy occurred.
tears

rebel58's photo
Sat 09/13/08 11:10 AM
Very, very nice. flowerforyou

flame1cutie's photo
Sat 09/13/08 11:11 AM
:cry: Awesome writeflowerforyou

rodfcutler's photo
Sat 09/13/08 11:11 AM
Thankyou! Glad you enjoy these.They all come instantly to me,cant explain why or how,but sometimes words start streaming through me and feel must write them down!flowerforyou