Topic: Sing
myanimalcracker's photo
Thu 10/02/08 08:15 PM
I was dreaming
of you unexpectedly; you were sipping
strong coffee and my attention, a familiar voice drowning
out distance, weaving and drifting
between us, through my ears and lungs and fingers, moving
even lower, then taking
me by gunpoint, pulling
us closer together, walking
me through playlists of our past, singing
me back to stupid and dangerous love, repeating
the chorus we wrote together, turning
the volume up on the songs I’m constantly humming
without realizing.

ArtGurl's photo
Thu 10/02/08 08:18 PM
Wow ... nicely done ... flowerforyou

Roco's photo
Thu 10/02/08 08:25 PM
.."taking me by gunpoint"...wow,..

Roco

no photo
Thu 10/02/08 08:42 PM
quite powerful write.flowerforyou flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Thu 10/02/08 08:59 PM
flowers flowers flowers flowers

no photo
Thu 10/02/08 09:33 PM
flowerforyou Way to go Kat flowers

offtopic cool shades!

myanimalcracker's photo
Thu 10/02/08 10:18 PM
Thank you

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s1owhand's photo
Fri 10/03/08 12:39 PM
beautiful dreaming flowerforyou