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myanimalcracker · 2008-10-02T20:15:20-07:00

I was dreaming of you unexpectedly; you were sipping strong coffee and my attention, a familiar voice drowning out distance, weaving and drifting between us, through my ears and lungs and fingers, moving even lower, then taking me by gunpoint, pulling us closer together, walking me through playlists of our past, singing me back to stupid and dangerous love, repeating the chorus we wrote together, turning the volume up on the songs I’m constantly humming without realizing.

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myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Thu 10/02/08 08:15 PM
I was dreaming of you unexpectedly; you were sipping strong coffee and my attention, a familiar voice drowning out distance, weaving and drifting between us, through my ears and lungs and fingers, moving even lower, then taking me by gunpoint, pulling us closer together, walking me through playlists of our past, singing me back to stupid and dangerous love, repeating the chorus we wrote together, turning the volume up on the songs I’m constantly humming without realizing.

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Thu 10/02/08 08:18 PM
Wow ... nicely done ...

Roco Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 1165	Thu 10/02/08 08:25 PM
.."taking me by gunpoint"...wow,.. Roco

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Thu 10/02/08 08:42 PM
quite powerful write.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 10/02/08 08:59 PM


Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Thu 10/02/08 09:33 PM
Way to go Kat cool shades!

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Thu 10/02/08 10:18 PM
Thank you Art Roco pkd Mom Bill

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Fri 10/03/08 12:39 PM
beautiful dreaming

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