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Topic: Your Thoughts
SlowHands's photo
Fri 03/30/07 07:57 AM
You're the first thought I had when I opened my eyes,
waking from a dream,waiting on the mornings sunrise,
your smile warms my lonely heart,when I look at you,
your kisses soft and sweet,as the first mornings dew,
together we laugh and smile,each and every sunny day,
telling each our tales,special in our own funny way,
your dreams hold me tight,and this I'll never forget,
I come to hold your heart,walking into our sunset...

You're the first thought I had when I opened my eyes,
you even turn a cloudy day into bright and sunny skies,
you drive away the rain,forgetting all my pain,
I send to you my love,upon a dreamy moonlit sky,
giving all I'm worth,to hear your loving sigh,
dreaming of our passion,in our sweet loving tries,
you are the one in my heart,when I close my eyes...

LAMom's photo
Fri 03/30/07 08:00 AM
Beautiful,,, Love is Incredible flowerforyou

SlowHands's photo
Fri 03/30/07 08:30 AM
Thank You Lamom,it is love that inspires my muse of poetry.

rarerose's photo
Fri 03/30/07 08:33 AM
very beautiful

SlowHands's photo
Fri 03/30/07 08:48 AM
Thank You Rarerose,
I have read some of your poems,you show talent but,geeze your poems make
me want to cry.
Lighten up,this is a dating site,not a hating site.

rarerose's photo
Fri 03/30/07 09:13 AM
Well dont u think I know that....most of mine are happy...if you thumb
back a page or more you will see...I am usually a very happy person but
sometimes your heart just needs to cry.

SlowHands's photo
Fri 03/30/07 09:20 AM
Just cry it out,it will be all better in the morning.

rarerose's photo
Fri 03/30/07 09:30 AM
not sure if any more crying will do any more good for me, even though I
know I probably will...but I am strong and will be just fine and on my
merry way

SlowHands's photo
Fri 03/30/07 09:58 AM
tommorrow is another day,closer to the one you love.

SlowHands's photo
Fri 03/30/07 04:57 PM
when you think of tommorrow,
the setting sun is your reply,
when you dream of tommorrow,
do you see me in your eyes,
when you look upon my eyes,
do you see the setting sun,
will you hold me past tommorrow,
and let me know that I'm the one?

SlowHands's photo
Fri 03/30/07 09:31 PM
I wrote this last part when I was in high school.

kinda thought it might fit here.

no photo
Sat 03/31/07 11:40 AM
Who ever you wrote that for is very lucky to have found you , i'm sure
she is very much in love with you ,what a heart you have (
Beautiful)flowerforyou

DANE1973's photo
Sat 03/31/07 11:47 AM
I loved the poem Slowhands, I'm going to have to show it to my girl
later.:wink: Of course you'll get the credit, I don't tag or steal
others art.

SlowHands's photo
Sat 03/31/07 12:47 PM
Thank You Slammin,I'm sure she knows how I feel!

sure Dane,you can show her just remember it's mine,
but if she kisses you for it you can keep them for yourself.

Tneal's photo
Sat 03/31/07 05:36 PM
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

SlowHands's photo
Sun 04/01/07 09:03 AM
Tneal,

hmmmmmmmmm what?

buttons's photo
Sun 04/01/07 09:27 AM
very nice poem slow...its so what i want in life..flowerforyou

SlowHands's photo
Sun 04/01/07 11:18 AM
Thank You Buttons,
I hope you find what you are looking for.

spay's photo
Mon 04/02/07 10:31 AM
smokin

devin112's photo
Mon 04/02/07 10:39 AM
drinker smokin glasses

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