Topic: Would I ?
SlowHands's photo
Fri 03/30/07 09:16 AM

I would hold her in the dark of night,
I would hold her all day long,
but somewhere in the spark of fight,
she said that I was wrong,
I would give her all the stars
and the moon upon the sky,
but somewhere in the night,
she found another guy,
that is why I find a tear,
streaking down my face,
that is why you find me here,
I search for love upon this place.

juju2680's photo
Fri 03/30/07 09:42 AM
very nice.:cry:
best wishez

Hotchikita's photo
Fri 03/30/07 09:46 AM
beautiful words Slow hope you find your right girl.

SlowHands's photo
Fri 03/30/07 09:49 AM
Thank You...I already have,I'm just here for friends.

SlowHands's photo
Fri 03/30/07 09:39 PM
this poem won a contest for me in high school.

karmafury's photo
Sat 03/31/07 09:12 AM
Very nice read. Well written.

SlowHands's photo
Sat 03/31/07 09:28 AM
thank you Karmafury,

nice avatar,where did you get the dragon pictures?

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 03/31/07 09:30 AM
The judges weren't wrong it is a great poem.

bigsmile

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SlowHands's photo
Sat 03/31/07 09:37 AM
Thank You Gryphyn,my teen years were very tough on me,
I had just lost my sweet heart a week before this was written.
It was inspired by pain,and the need for a good grade.

Morena350's photo
Sat 03/31/07 10:36 AM
nice poem slowhands, hummm can I copy this one? bigsmile

SlowHands's photo
Sat 03/31/07 11:11 AM
Thank You Morena,
yes you may copy this poem if you wish,
just words on a page at this point.

spay's photo
Mon 04/02/07 09:26 AM
smokin

devin112's photo
Mon 04/02/07 09:29 AM
smokin drinker glasses

SlowHands's photo
Mon 04/02/07 09:50 AM
are you two joined at the hip or what?

devin112's photo
Mon 04/02/07 09:54 AM
DONT KNOW ABOUT HIM,BUT I AM CHILLIN.laugh

spay's photo
Mon 04/02/07 10:14 AM
*TAKES NOTES FOR THE GEESE TO GANDER*

smokin

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