Topic: House
myanimalcracker's photo
Tue 10/28/08 06:19 PM
If you were a house,
What kind of room would you be?
That excluded one
closed door
unmade bed
scattered sheets
and pencils that almost
started that letter,
or maybe
that cluttered one
books tossed about
you never finished -
couldn’t read
because you didn’t like
the ending.
In any case,
it isn’t public
it’s the faucet dripping
unchecked, pooling and
irritating, and when wet
I walk away breathless.

lavos28's photo
Tue 10/28/08 06:25 PM
amazing as usual

no photo
Tue 10/28/08 08:34 PM
wow!!!flowers flowers

LAMom's photo
Wed 10/29/08 08:08 AM
flowers Yaaaa Wow Indeed flowers

s1owhand's photo
Wed 10/29/08 09:13 AM
Edited by s1owhand on Wed 10/29/08 09:14 AM
the florida room
a profusion of sprouting
humidity
scent of the floral shop
glass ceiling
warm in the winter
glowing with light
alive with green and oxygen
a small table
with white linen
tye dyed napkins
warm crepes
butter, sugar, yogurt, sour cream
fresh fruit
twinkling eyes
laughter

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BonnyMiss's photo
Wed 10/29/08 11:35 AM
I'd be a room with soft cushions on the floor................ Very good poem flowers