Topic: wings upon wings
jimz's photo
Mon 11/10/08 04:11 PM
Edited by jimz on Mon 11/10/08 04:16 PM
sun in the mutiny
lions mane drenched
the sky reaching pandoras box
box cutters
cut soul

ok
right it
in a rectangle
where the ends
meet
awk
ward

paint the cloth
of the mercy sea
waves collapse
sun drowns

end
upsheets
numbers
in cells
yet cells
number
only
one
rock
sea
crusted
many
crabs
yet
no
in
fin
ate

i
have
one
mer
sea
only
one
claw
only
one
octupus
life
one
sun
yet
i
have
in
fin
ate

cloud
the crowd
the arms
open wings
heat released wings
and the walls have wings
or the wings are full of walls

batlike
upside down
smile

sun
of the suns mask
unhidden eyes

the
endless
void
ends

wings
upon
wings

no photo
Mon 11/10/08 07:14 PM
nicely done :smile:

s1owhand's photo
Mon 11/10/08 07:22 PM
shades

LAMom's photo
Tue 11/11/08 12:18 PM
Jimmy Simply Amazing :heart: flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 11/11/08 07:11 PM
Very nicely done jimz. :smile: drinker

aries43's photo
Tue 11/11/08 11:00 PM
terrific, (how do you do that)? well done.
:thumbsup:

no photo
Tue 11/11/08 11:15 PM
A beautiful style & flow....smokin